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The chaddest of all vampires. Bro fked up Lucifer fkin Morningstar.
I mean there are people irl who hook up with their cousins
"Daily life of highschool boys" A fkin hilarious slice of life anime.
wasn't he level 6 a few chapters back?
👍 AI heavy stories tend to be tedious to read so it is better to not use it too much. Remember moderation is the key.
You explained one word "Enough" for three whole paragraphs, about how he defused the tension. You're going round and round and round and the story has stopped going forward. Let there be progress in the story without it being too flowery. The time skip where he established his templars and got his castle just went by because of those very same verbose chapters. It would have been decent if you wrote it like you used to, it would have made the story more alive instead of seemingly AI.
Not to mention his father isn't even lord of iron isles anymore. Harlaw is.