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  • 2yr
    Commented

    So..., just curious, but why are you stuck with pairing him with Helena? Not a problem, just a curiousity.

    Ch 41 Summons
    altalt
    Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
    Movies · HelloDarkness07
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  • 2yr
    Replied to LawWillOblivionK

    I always imagine how whipped the ones calling no harem must be that they cannot even have a harem in their fantasies.

    altalt
    my dark past shall be removed
    Anime & Comics · Alekzi
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Is every review here a spam or fake? Not a single real review. Any author that uses Edith OC is not an author. This is just lazy. Could have made the story without that OC and it would have been fine.

    altalt
    A God Travels Across The Multiverse
    Movies · NiksElDrago
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Story might be fine if you can read it with horrible grammer and the Chinese name. It breaks the flow every time I try to read it. Even if the original has a Chinese name, you could change it to something readable.

    altalt
    dropper.
    Others · AshGod7
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  • 2yr
    Commented

    True. It was a bit disappointing. But mostly because it feels like you just want to nerf him due to previous version. He is not even that powerful to begin with. I am not sure if you are going to add new difficulties just for the sake of it or not. But we will see I guess.

    Ch 34 Well.. fuck
    altalt
    Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
    Movies · HelloDarkness07
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  • 2yr
    Commented

    Is this a translation? Because there are a few mistakes that are usually seen in those. Like calling them two brothers Jonathan and Evelyn.BROTHERS... Some more examples but if you read it again they are easy to find.

    Ch 7 Thoughts and Possibilities
    altalt
    HP: A Legend Begins
    Book&Literature · KingDovahkiin
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Too many crossovers. The author does not know how to write well. There is cultivation in here. So beware. Then for some reason, One Piece as well. It makes no sense. It started off well, but it seems like the author got bored and started adding whatever comes to mind regardless of the story. Disappointing!!!

    altalt
    Reborn as a Dothraki (GOT SI) [haitus]
    TV · OnanMaster
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Good so far. But if you nerf him, that's goodbye. Nerf sucks . No need for it. His attitude could be worked on, but no nerf. MAKE IT WORK. You seem to be a good enough author.

    altalt
    SERAPH IN HORROR UNIVERSE ( DROPPED )
    Movies · BLACK_GLOOM
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Multiple MCs that switch between POV. After it happened the first two times, I stopped reading so I don't know if it stopped. But you should skip this fic if multiple MCs is irritating, annoying and straight up feel unnecessary. It could have been the same MC in all the worlds and it would not have made a difference.

    altalt
    Afterlife Travel
    Movies · AstralWriter
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Not as innovative as author wants it be. I might be biased because I have read better stories about shield power used rather innovatively. The MC is also not as engaging. A bit more time spent on unimportant things than should beq in a fanfic.

    altalt
    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • 2yr
    Replied to Harem_fan

    Have you even read the canon? If that is really your version of Luna, you need to get your imagination checked.

    altalt
    Harry Potter: The legendary Successor System
    Movies · theTripleX_HSA
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  • 2yr
    Commented

    No idea who they are, so NO.

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    altalt
    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Seriously! The character descriptions are eating away my patience. Otherwise decent. We know what they look like, stop describing them. It is very annoying.

    altalt
    Carefree Path of a Wondering Stranger
    Others · MasterBeast7016
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  • 2yr
    Commented

    Wanda and Susan. Carol is too overpowered, Natasha is overdone. Raven is like Tonks. Sif is way too into Thor. Don't care for Emma but no complaint for her either but still prefer Susan over her. Wanda brings Chaos magic. So final choices are Ororo, Wanda and Susan.

    Ch 162 Epilouge HP World (R-18)... {EDITED}
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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    I like the story but I had a few problems with this. The cultivation aside, the fruit is not really used well. The story is still too slow for reaching 40 chapters. I had expected the mc to be much stronger by now. The story is just a bit too slow and concentrating on irrelevant stuff.

    altalt
    Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
    Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    This was disappointing. I was excited about a jumper in marvel. But then Harley Quinn came along for no reason and she was chosen as his mate by God. The MC having no choice what so ever. His personality is also not really appealing to read. No problems with it, but just not worth reading about him. Good Luck with that pairing though. Definitely not for me.

    altalt
    Jumper Fanatic in Marvel (MCU)
    Movies · FallingStarssux
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  • 2yr
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    The second one is a new one with better grammar.

    altalt
    Movie World’s Archvillain (Movie FF)
    Movies · xlsl
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Seriously! There are three version of this story on Webnovel now. They also have better translation. Check those out or put more effort in your grammar and spelling.

    altalt
    Movie World’s Archvillain (Movie FF)
    Movies · xlsl
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Alright! The low rating is for absolute stupidity after chapter 20. He works hard for all his powers the replicates it and gives them to Shri after meeting her for an hour. It just way to stupid to even elaborate this point. I could not read further. Think more about your stories next time.

    altalt
    Marvel: Elysium (Old)
    Movies · king_frosh
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  • 2yr
    Posted

    Is this a copy of the one on fanfiction by YugiXtian? Are you the same author? Because that has been stuck on chapter 35 for 5 years. Did you get permission?

    altalt
    Shinobi Chronicles - New Genesis
    Anime & Comics · X3nr0x_Starfield
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