Nr_Yet1208
The paragraphs Novement from the confusion to the monsters to the burning in the leg to the coldness and it felt confusing. ‘More than the confusion I’ll attribute to waking up in a place and relaising there’s something with the grass and all that.
Nr_Yet1208:I'll be glad to know why you'd think that
Waw, excellent first chapter. Straight into the action, and yet it felt like nothing was missing. Like the character, the first POV brings up with him into this unbelievable and terrible setting. Bonus point for the realism of the fight. That's how fantasy should be. Even a goblin is a dangerous for for for the unprepared !