I am a 21-year-old undergraduate student who would be riddled in debt if not for my mother. At the same time, it is because of her, I'm writing a story and trying to earn something to help ease her.
Do you know what makes a reader hooked to this type of stories? It is when they can picture it in manga form and this story does that. I give you a 5 because that's the best I can do now. But know, I'm in love with your story. Let me add it to my library now. Talk to you later.
Upur story is too amazing, the write-up amazing, the storytelling superb and above all, I’m digging Alexander. Write more great author, I can’t wait to read more
Your book is frankly amazing. Good writing and pacing. I've got to ask the initial chapters are in 2nd or 3rd person P.O.V? I plan on reading more soon but I've got to get back to writing. Write more and hopefully I'll review soon.
So I'm not good with cultivation stories. I can read the mangas just not the stories. All I can say is I can't wait for this to be turned into a manga so many people will read it. As a story, 5 star as a manga 100 stars. Just think about it. It is amazing.
I'm so sorry my review is coming late. As you can tell from my own book, I haven't the time to be on Webnovel but I took the time and read your book. It is amazing, it is wonderful, it is spine tingling. I can't wait to read more and see more. Also can I give you a round of applause for giving us a female lead who is also a villain and successful at that. I'm honestly shook.
Author's review: Little to no grammatical errors. Mix of different mythologies, kudos if you can guess them. Strange mix of romance, still to come and jaw breaking writing. The author knows how to mix things up and give us what we are not expecting. Nuala's commentary: Hi everyone, my name is Nuala and I'm so glad you're all reading my story. Please continue to enjoy and comment. I helps give me the strength I need to fight the battle for all humans.
It's an interesting book so far. As I'm not someone well versed with gaming as well as the goings of such a world, there's not much I can say. Just keep writing and enjoying yourself.
The paragraphs Novement from the confusion to the monsters to the burning in the leg to the coldness and it felt confusing. ‘More than the confusion I’ll attribute to waking up in a place and relaising there’s something with the grass and all that.
I am not arguing, I am trying to educate you both as the ahthor and a person on how caught unawares is grammatically correct. Frankly don’t see this as an argument. 😀
It’s not uncommon. In fact, a lot of people use it. Not just in my country but in others I have travelled to.
I know but in this case, grammarly didn’t correct me when i punched it in. Also since Im talking large scale here, according to dictionaries, caught unawares and unaware are both grammarly correct. So theres no problem.
Not in this case, darling. According to grammarly. caught unawares is right.
Its not a perfectly good word as you said Game is the perfect word in this situation