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Kikiyobear

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I am a 21-year-old undergraduate student who would be riddled in debt if not for my mother. At the same time, it is because of her, I'm writing a story and trying to earn something to help ease her.

2021-05-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear11d
    Replied to kuhaku_sora

    Awww, you’re making me blush.

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    War Queen
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear11d
    Replied to Mediocre_author

    Thanks for your lovely review.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear11d
    Posted

    Do you know what makes a reader hooked to this type of stories? It is when they can picture it in manga form and this story does that. I give you a 5 because that's the best I can do now. But know, I'm in love with your story. Let me add it to my library now. Talk to you later.

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    NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
    Fantasy Romance · kuhaku_sora
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear12d
    Posted

    Upur story is too amazing, the write-up amazing, the storytelling superb and above all, I’m digging Alexander. Write more great author, I can’t wait to read more

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    Alexander the Great Mage
    Fantasy · mrant12
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear12d
    Commented

    Yoooo. This is sick I’m enjoying this.

    Ch 1 Transmigration
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    Alexander the Great Mage
    Fantasy · mrant12
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear30d
    Posted

    Your book is frankly amazing. Good writing and pacing. I've got to ask the initial chapters are in 2nd or 3rd person P.O.V? I plan on reading more soon but I've got to get back to writing. Write more and hopefully I'll review soon.

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    The Bet
    Contemporary Romance · Jo_J
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear30d
    Posted

    So I'm not good with cultivation stories. I can read the mangas just not the stories. All I can say is I can't wait for this to be turned into a manga so many people will read it. As a story, 5 star as a manga 100 stars. Just think about it. It is amazing.

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    Rising Dawn
    Fantasy · Minxs
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear30d
    Posted

    I'm so sorry my review is coming late. As you can tell from my own book, I haven't the time to be on Webnovel but I took the time and read your book. It is amazing, it is wonderful, it is spine tingling. I can't wait to read more and see more. Also can I give you a round of applause for giving us a female lead who is also a villain and successful at that. I'm honestly shook.

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    The Villainess Law of Vengeance
    Fantasy Romance · Kiiara
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Posted

    Author's review: Little to no grammatical errors. Mix of different mythologies, kudos if you can guess them. Strange mix of romance, still to come and jaw breaking writing. The author knows how to mix things up and give us what we are not expecting. Nuala's commentary: Hi everyone, my name is Nuala and I'm so glad you're all reading my story. Please continue to enjoy and comment. I helps give me the strength I need to fight the battle for all humans.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Minxs

    You know its funny i didnt even think about that. Completely forgot that i said that.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Posted

    It's an interesting book so far. As I'm not someone well versed with gaming as well as the goings of such a world, there's not much I can say. Just keep writing and enjoying yourself.

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    Ascension: Online
    Video Games · Cyclxne
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    You don’t have to agree to it. I made an opinion.

    Ch 2 Where the hell am I?
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    Dawn- An age of Darkness
    Fantasy · Nr_Yet1208
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    The paragraphs Novement from the confusion to the monsters to the burning in the leg to the coldness and it felt confusing. ‘More than the confusion I’ll attribute to waking up in a place and relaising there’s something with the grass and all that.

    Ch 2 Where the hell am I?
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Commented

    Not so sure of the first chapter personally. The things happening felt disjointed. Moving on.

    Ch 2 Where the hell am I?
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    Dawn- An age of Darkness
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    I am not arguing, I am trying to educate you both as the ahthor and a person on how caught unawares is grammatically correct. Frankly don’t see this as an argument. 😀

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    It’s not uncommon. In fact, a lot of people use it. Not just in my country but in others I have travelled to.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    I know but in this case, grammarly didn’t correct me when i punched it in. Also since Im talking large scale here, according to dictionaries, caught unawares and unaware are both grammarly correct. So theres no problem.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    This is introductory. Sorry its not your cup of tea, but there’s no such thing as too much narration.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    Not in this case, darling. According to grammarly. caught unawares is right.

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  • Kikiyobear
    Kikiyobear1mth
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    Its not a perfectly good word as you said Game is the perfect word in this situation

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