Master_mind
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Master_mind5mthPostedI m writing this review after reading more than 30 chapter and I can say it is intriguing from the very first chapter . I know my review may contain spoilers but yeah the way those voices wishers in to Ellanious while an unknown voice always called out her name in sad is so captivating. It's a must read.
- Master_mind7mthCommentedCh 21 Choices and Consequences
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Maybe a devil đ
"Aren't you the god?" I mocked. - Master_mind7mthCommentedCh 20 Tying the Knot
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The past repeats
"I already told you about my decision, so it will not change no matter what the reason is!" I said and walked toward the door when he said, "We are bankrupt now." - Master_mind7mthCommented
Again ? Is he lost it or what ?
"You have to marry Duke Alexavier Agnes." he said the same thing again, which made me stand up in anger. - Master_mind7mthCommented
So strict
"Bernice! Is this how you intend to become a knight? If so, you might as well give up. Frankly, I'm starting to regret asking the Marquis for permission to train you. It seems you lack the determination," he criticized, his frustration apparent. - Master_mind7mthCommented
Poor boy đ
"And I'm sure you don't want to see this." This is the first time I ever behaved like this which made him run from the place while me and father were only inside the room. - Master_mind7mthCommented
Marquis, please listen to ur daughter .. ...
"Because he too went with the Marquis, and now you are the only one here." As she said this, I clenched my fist in anger. This is really frustrating. Everyone knows how I have changed. Even my father saw my behavior last time, then just how the hell could he leave the place like this when he is fully aware he has a guest to attend. - Master_mind7mthCommented
The voice sounds painful
Again, the same dream. Why? - Master_mind7mthCommentedCh 16 A Fractured Encounter
- Master_mind7mthCommentedCh 15 A Fateful Encounter
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Reading all the updated chapters I came to know why it had mystery genre as well. The starting gave me the vibe of breaking a girls feelings toward her first love but than again the way it has portrayed that she died when no one around really put so much mystery. So many questions take place. Like where was the husband? Why the entire mention was Eempty? Why he get angry over his parents death? So much questions. I will wait to see the mystery unfolds.
- Master_mind2yrCommented
Control your anger
"Don't underestimate me," Zeline said as he coughed up blood. He was right, I was underestimating him. But I didn't have any choice. My rage might just have been my worst nemesis. - Master_mind2yrCommented
No doubt
The princess ignored the sharkface. "What do you say, Gorgan? Oh right, you prefer being called Jelight. My Jelight?" she said with a seductive tone. She really was a bitch. - Master_mind2yrCommented
Hahahahahh
"How courteous! I am Daarc," I sarcastically answered. And something was probably wrong with me too. My legs were shaking but I tried to bluff all the way. I wanted to run away and yet, I couldn't. After all the talk and bluff, running away right now just wasn't an option. If I ran away now, I wouldn't be able to live with myself. - Master_mind2yrCommented
Living is important
He grinned. "Shouldn't you try a little harder?" This was all just fun and games to him. But to me, it was life and death. I couldn't do anything besides dodging and this was going nowhere.