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I shamelessly give a review to myself. :) I plan to divide the story into two main stages. 1) Apocalypse in MC original world. 2) Calamity in Gondola dimension. Synopsis: After living in the Gondola universe for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of the emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his homeworld, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began. Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :) Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible. Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story. Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story. World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.
I think most of us have read enough apocalypse and revenge novels already but this novel is simply mind-blowing! In my opinion, this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. This story has a lot more potential and positive content. I'm glad that I found this. I think I definitely stumbled upon a rare gem here. Not only we have romance during the apocalyptic world, but there are also game abilities and kingdom building involved! Yes! You didn't read it wrong. They are all in this novel! There were also some scenes that I cried a lot and there were some scenes that I laughed quietly at myself. Most reborn novels have just only narrated the MC's past life experiences but here it was portrayed beautifully through the MC's perspective. I even got emotional at some points when I read it. I highly recommend this novel. It is so worth it !!! The only thing that I wish the author to fix is to release a longer chapter and more frequent. The author, please keep writing this book!
Going in I wasnt too sure what to expect but having read it now, to anyone thinking about reading, I definitely would recommend it. It has a nice blend of sci-fi and fantasy, the chapters are a very readable length and the whole story flows very nicely. I really like how the characters emotions, regrets and motives are so clearly outlined, it really enables me to connect with them and immerse myself in the story. Some fabulous writing, a shame there arent more chapters! Keep up the fantastic work
Oh my god! This book is simply awesome. What an unexpected lovely story inside an apocalypse novel. I was glad that I've found this novel! I highly recommend this novel to everyone who likes rebirth, apocalypse, mystery, and romance. I know it doesn't sound like it should come together but it does! Gives it a try for the first five chapters, then after that, I guarantee this will be one of your favorites!
I really liked this book. It knows how to get in a fushoji's heart. The story is original and thought out. I liked you describe the background iinbeggining so we can understand better what is going on. There are some confusing parts but your writing is improving little by little with each chapter. Keep the good work!
I must say this is one of the best novels you can ever read, from the character development, to the character's friends and family development it's just the best. If your into novels where the mc builds an empire start reading this one. If magic is your thing then this novel for you to. The author is great and friendly which makes you feel more comfortable reading this novel and a sense of belonging to the novel's community itself. I also like how technology and magic is integrated in this novel as well as different worlds coming together. I love how the mc goes back in time by his own power to change the unfortunate fate of human beings. I like how the mc is not cold blooded to his friends and family and that there is no family infighting happening.
Writing has a few mistakes here and there, but nothing major. It is steadily written and is fascinating. Story Development - explains all of the action. One by one, it makes sense. Transitions are present, overall very unique. Character Design - interesting, uniquely written as well. Nothing else to say really. World Background - Very Unique, Captivating and Interesting. Something I wasn't expecting, very well done. Overall a good read, very thoroughly written and described. Well done Author!
This is a well-thought-out novel. Details are on point. I like how the story and plot is weaved in the narration. However, I am not a fan of changing POV (from 3rd to 1st). Traditionally, should stick to one POV all through out, but this is webnovel and to each his own. It doesn't affect the fact that I like this novel so much. Quite interesting. Keep on writing, author. 🤗👍