Comments of chapter undefined of Morphing Iniquity

I don't know what exactly I expected when I clicked the book link, but this definitely was not it. The first chapter was triggering for me, as are some of your words but don't get me wrong. I don't mean that in a bad way. This isn't a kind of book you just breeze through as I had intended to. Its a kind of book you sit down on the patio or balcony to read, with a large mug of coffee in your hand while the winds ruffle your hair and dry up the tears staining your cheeks. Or maybe while you lay in bed, hidden away underneath the covers to hide the tears and hurt your book reminds of away from the world There a few grammatical errors I'd like to point out but now's not the time and I'm sure you could easily fix those while editing. Your characters are complex and intriguing and your writing in itself feels like poetry written with the intentions to make readers feel every word and think on every sentence. And I definitely look forward to continuing this story that's as intriguing as its thought-provoking. Have a wonderful weekend <3

From the very first line ❤️.... It's deep!! I wish I could write like you!

This one is my favorite for some reason

It's gr8

Why I read this novel when I click the link.. Because of this novel I cannot read another novel.. Its good for first chapter

Like the concept go for it

nice work

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This is so well thought through. Some of the phrasings are hard to grasp, but overall you can get the idea of what the author is trying to say. The ideas and concepts are deep, touching subjects that most people are afraid to go near, and I love it.

it takes me time to completely grasp the whole thing but I can tell the effort put into it mostly on how deep the thoughts are.....

Ohmygoodness this book is so wonderful. Every word, phrase, sentence, paragraph contains knowledge. It feels like the author is one of the wisest people I've come to know. Just WOW

Honestly, I had to search on the web to see if this was just a repost of an actual book... This is totally different from what I would usually read on this site, and that's not a bad thing.

To say the east this book is not what I expected at all, yet it is a very nice surprise. Some of the meanings behind the words can get a little lost while other thoughts are better conveyed. But even despite those negatives, it is an intriguing spiritual book in which I find my interest captured.

This is a interesting twisting ride. Unexpected, Surreal, and abstract at times. The story tells you its not what you expect yet it still catches you off guard. defiantly worth the read.

Yep. Definitively not my thing now. Looks great. But not something to read for fun. And me I'm always seeking fun before anything else. Even if the story want to picture some heavy themes, it must begin with an exciting setting to trap the reader in your world. Before now, hitting him in the feels. That's my way of story telling. Can't apply to anyone else. But it explains why I will have to drop this for now. ಥ_ಥ

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Lance is the man xD

Very thought provoking - although I am constantly pausing at the “page” statements randomly thrown in with a number. Not sure what that is suppose to be conveying.

I adore heavily charged plots not the butterflies and dewdrops but the sad reality that so many people even our loved ones try to paint pretty. Just because you say I will be fine it doesn't make it hurt any less. So I very much respect Lance and I can relate because the voice in one s head can sometimes make echoes that resonate sense. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

I like the point of view description and narrative given by this story. it does well to make you understand what the writer is trying to convey through his characters which I like. it's a technique I haven't mastered yet but I believe the author is doing well with it. the qualms I have I only with the casual news the author instills sometimes. it's not inherently a bad thing but a novel should still give a sense of being novel and not go too casual as a whole like a letter... I hope the author sees this as valid