Writing Quality: Good quality. Few noticeable error, but nothing to affect the flow of the story. 4.5/5 Updating Stability: Can't complain much about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, Kelly Smith, and her chronicles with a unique system in a transmigration setting. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well thought out. Especially that of Kelly Smith. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built on urban fantasy and gamelit system elements. The use of urban fantasy and a system world is so fitting. 5/5 Overall: A well written novel, although still at the early stages. 4.8/5
The writing in this work has a few typos or missing words but that didn't detract from the story, it kept me reading. I wanted to know more about Kelly, about her situation, about System H. The writing has a way of leaving you feeling intrigued whilst not giving away too much! Well done author, keep improving your work and this will be a hit!
Wow. This story is very refreshing to read for me for a while. I love and enjoy every character's dialogue. The narratives are so engaging that I don't mind the g-errors. Story development. I would look forward to her missions with the system. Overall this story is very interesting. This would definitely stay on my colls Keep it up, author!
Even though systems is not the usual book I would read, I actually loved reading this authors book. I'm the one who would love to read young **** romances, but this author proved that I could read systems too. Very unique and I will actually be reading a systems book for once!!! The author has definitely persuaded me to do so!!! Thank you. I do want to mention I am the author /user from the forum as BellsandLexShow.