A_Webnovel_Author
I really missed plot progression in this chapter. All I read was a guy having a nerd gasm over his own body, people having a nerd gasm over his body and Sansa having a nerd gasm over his body. I like the innovation like simple fitness equipment and routines tough. I just dont like the fact that the majority of a chapter was about a dude rambling about his body. Seriously, atleast use half your chapters for plot progression. Theres no point in reading a supposed story if there is no story due to there being no plot progression.
A_Webnovel_Author:There's not much plot in 'Game of Thrones' until 298 AC. But there are things in the chapter that tell you stuff is gonna be different - Sansa's age is a pretty big thing for obvious reasons. I even said why in the chapter. Plus, there was a timeskip, I need to show where the MC is at and how he's progressed otherwise people will be confused about how he looks, how strong he is, what he's been doing, etc, etc. This chapter was an interlude between the earlier chapters and the next few chapters. Also, don't you think the words 'All I read was a guy having a nerd gasm over his body, people having a nerd gasm over his body and Sansa having a nerd gasm over his body' are a bit of an exaggeration? 300-ish words out of a chapter of over 2700 words...and that's all you read? Please try and make statements that leave out hyperbole. Finding the criticism in your comment is much easier without you gaslighting me into thinking I've somehow written a whole chapter about my MC staring at himself in the mirror.