Comments of chapter undefined of Might Of All Beings

0/10 he really just met her and she already told her everything what the **** brother really the backstory if it was good and everything but tell everything to a person you just got to know

Was it really necessary to tell her his life story?

I will be honest, I skipped all his backstory, not relevant in the current context the MC is in. There is two way to write about the life of a MC: - the first one is little by little when it is relevant (some flashback about a part of his life when needed). - the second is to make a big prolog where you follow the MC before he reincarnate. Right now it is too forced and break the flow. The MC want to explain about Friday? Just say that it's a kind of archive magic that he learned that allow him to learn things easily and keep track of his growth. No need for her to know everything about his system or his previews life.

Author, sigh, what are you doing, it all started so well from the very beginning. What did this fool tell you or where did you read to tell the first person you met about your life. I am not saying that you cannot trust everyone or go to such an extreme. Trust must be earned. Even if you have a system, you still need to use your brain.

Yuck, hate when the mc does this. I'm out

Wwtttttttffffffff

This chapter was good, but I feel like he really overshared. I mean, it could be because this is the closest he's ever felt to anyone and feels he could tell them anything, but it just happened kinda weird. But still, thanks for the chapter ☺️

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agent with iq 178 seriously he is fuucking stupid than me

Stupid mc I am out of here

Keep going please 🤩👌

This guy just told her about things from his world that aren't in this one, expecting her to understand what they are.😑

wtf wtf sensei are you out of your mind?? are you ok?? it's a prunk? sigh i am disapointed

From a cool smart agent to stupid dumb japanese virgin boy. scratch that, he aint virgin no more. his just sTuPiD.

Don't you hear about it all the time on the news? What? Ofc I'm talking about those fathers that gets jealous of their sons for achieving and potentially elevating their family situation from the gutter! Almost every day you hear how they turned drunktards into suicide while blaming the child, it's basically a daily occurrence!! -_-""" Please dude, be believable at least... the nonsense it's hitting the face so hard it's painful to read.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Well this different but interesting keep going

you earned a drop.

hmmm.....I'm assuming you told her because she's a harem member? Well I don't care that you told her considering that for whatever reason it already has (love) by her name but why after ***? Or was 1 round enough?