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Miki_Marlo75

Miki_Marlo75

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Muy desinteresado en mi entorno solo observó mí entorno como si fuesen libros que se escriben con las personas como simples títeres que cuelgan de sus hilos invisibles narrando una historia vacía

2019-11-10 JoinedArgentina
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo753d
    Commented

    I don't understand the power levels in this fight, it honestly doesn't make it very clear.

    Ch 326 Flame God vs Fire Dragon
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • Miki_Marlo75
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    Confirm that the story is advancing in my opinion it is getting worse the last chapters are practically information and quick information And jump from one event to another as if nothing had happened

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    A New Life In The Arrowverse
    TV · Ezzy_E
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7522d
    Posted

    I would like you to at least put the link to the original story and give some credit to the original author in the synopsis Apart from that the story is interesting and it is a good choice of translation.

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    Marvel: Journal Writing
    Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7523d
    Commented

    Just an opinion that everything is becoming simpler and seems like monologues

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7524d
    Posted

    The idea for the story is good, it has a lot to develop but this seems like an idea And this would be the draft more than anything, since the story is just events after others without context and a clear timeline that determines the rhythm of the story.

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo7526d
    Commented

    Thank you

    Ch 7 [|Ch.6 Candy People|]
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    Adventure Time: Shadow Elemental
    Anime & Comics · SirRandom
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Don't you find it childish and unnecessary to explain what his attacks do to his enemies?

    Ch 290 The Last Word
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Posted

    The story has many parts without context, the time jumps are random and the grammar is annoying, it is continuous text divided into paragraphs Clearly the plot jumps from development to revenge and sudden acceptance without arguments seems forced

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    Crossing The Twilight the Awakening
    Movies · Roberto_0461
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Too exaggerated for my taste

    Ch 173 167) La Piedra Filosofal(parte 4)
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    Harry Potter: Red Weasley El Extraño Mago Rojo
    Book&Literature · Emanuel_Alegre
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    The story became too boring for my taste I don't see a clear development

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Posted

    No offense but this story was already uploaded a long time ago by another author and it had more than 250 chapters translated This story is good if you take the time to read it I recommend it

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    (HP) I'm Only A Defense Against The Dark Arts Professor
    Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    Starlinght

    Ch 40 Aftermath - Homelander II
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    THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander
    TV · freedomfic
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo751mth
    Commented

    I understand that it is limited by its level but the change in power levels in the chapters leaves a lot to be desired

    Ch 58 Chapter- 55 Ais Training Section (2)
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    Danmachi: The Blind Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    Question: At some point will he stop being a goblin and evolve?

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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    Wow

    Ch 55 Chapter 55
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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
    Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    I don't know anything alone I only know that he comes up with something every couple of chapters.

    Ch 258 King Jellal
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    It's so empty

    Ch 91 Chapter 91 - War Game 06!!
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    Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    Good luck with history

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Yamato
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    DXD: Heavenly restriction
    Anime & Comics · Key_Tye
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    At this point I don't know what to think, it ruined the story a lot and the characters would have been different if it was much later but now it turned out horrible

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    Harry Potter: Sex Oriented Hogwarts
    Book&Literature · SmutDxddy
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  • Miki_Marlo75
    Miki_Marlo752mth
    Commented

    The story reached the detonating point that it was left without content and totally boring without direction.

    Ch 386 Final struggle!
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    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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