AxlesOfFate
KEEP IT UP! You've got serious literary capabilities, Author, and they shine through your meticulous wordplay and descriptive efforts. The pacing can stand for a bit of improvement, as at some times I skipped an entire paragraph or two in order to keep invested. In general, however, I think you're doing an amazing job, and I look forward to your further work. 10/10, Author!
Shameless self-review here enjoying the entire writing process and am happy that I am getting so many positive things said about my writing thank you everyone for the time you have spent with my novel. Everything makes a difference. Every read. Every power vote. Every Collection. Every Review. Every Comment. Thank you everyone again and again.
This story has a high potential and the writing quality is very good. Minimal or to no error at all. The characters are designed well. The author has successfully built the world background and the development of the story is smooth. I hope to see many more chapters in the future. Happy writing author!
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Phenomenal job on the daily updates, even I can't do that quite yet. The writing quality has a lot of room for improvement, as the first few chapters felt kind like marching through waist deep water. The story itself is pretty gripping and managed to hold my attention though, and the world feels as though it has a lot of history behind it, even if not explicitly stated. The character design. . . Is noticeably absent for the most part. I only just realized but I can't seem to visualize the MC or any of the other characters clearly as I write this. Descriptions of their clothing helps, but so far all I can imagine are faceless mannequins wearing fancy suits of armor or clothes. There's plenty of room for improvement, but as I've only read five chapters, my opinions are subject to change.
It's a pretty good story. I haven't read any other stories about possession but I definitely like this one. I don't have much to say about the MC, he just gives the impression of the typical shounen character The writing style is good and the background seems interesting and isn't shallow so the story has a lot of potential. It'd be amazing if Erebus was less obvious with his manipulation but the author should do what works for him/her
Here, on Webnovel are so many of fanasy stories... It's difficut to find something "different", something captivating and fascinating, etc... I think your story has this "catch". It's nice to read it. You've successfully created a different reality. The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. Keep writing!