Review Detail of MisterFlare in The Black Tome

Phenomenal job on the daily updates, even I can't do that quite yet. The writing quality has a lot of room for improvement, as the first few chapters felt kind like marching through waist deep water. The story itself is pretty gripping and managed to hold my attention though, and the world feels as though it has a lot of history behind it, even if not explicitly stated. The character design. . . Is noticeably absent for the most part. I only just realized but I can't seem to visualize the MC or any of the other characters clearly as I write this. Descriptions of their clothing helps, but so far all I can imagine are faceless mannequins wearing fancy suits of armor or clothes. There's plenty of room for improvement, but as I've only read five chapters, my opinions are subject to change.