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Reviews of First Book - Is no long being continued

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First Book - Is no long being continued

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Wild_Bunni93
Wild_Bunni93Lv3Wild_Bunni93

I Must Say....... I like strong Female Lead, the Character, and story development was very detailed. I can picture everything the author was saying. This book is now added to my library [img=recommend]great job author. Wild -Bunni

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MortalLearner
MortalLearnerLv14MortalLearner

Amazing! What a story you have. The female-lead character is absolutely unique and fascinating. The plot is well maintained. It will absolutely grip and hook the readers. Highly recommended!

YIANUWANGXIAO
YIANUWANGXIAOLv2YIANUWANGXIAO

Ohh strong female lead Love it hehehe, okay to the story, the progression of the story is good and the character is well delivered over all it has a potential keep up the good work author nim <3

stupidboi100
stupidboi100Lv1stupidboi100

This was actually quite a refreshing read and I must say the premise is quite striking with a strong female lead this story has the potential to be really grand and amazing keep it up author!

Glenstonx
GlenstonxLv2Glenstonx

Reveal spoiler

H41
H41Lv2H41

Amazing novel! I love all the characters introduced and the plot is interesting! Keep it up author, you're doing great! :>

Luna_Yu
Luna_YuLv2Luna_Yu

Love the story so far! The writing is really nice and I want to read more! Please publish daily. I can't wait to hear more about Lila and what happens!

Whendhie1
Whendhie1Lv3Whendhie1

Love the story. Not your usual prince and princess story and I like that. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ It has a lot of potential and I'm sure I'm going to enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work author. You are doing great โค๏ธ

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Another excellent title on Webnovel! (I know how difficult is to create a titile that it is adequate to the content, etc... and inkston would accept it). It makes me inquisitive... about the content. That's a big part of success as writers say. From the synopisis looks that you have an attractive idea. The synopsis itself is nicely written. I also noticed while reading your story that the language is good... You don't struggle, like most of us (not english speaking) with tenses, style or grammar. Just pay more attention to punctuation, etc. The storyline is interesting, characters are expressive. You're doing a really great job!

shenshi
shenshiLv4shenshi

It's quite an interesting story.. FL is strong and lovely. It's not like the usual Prince and Princess story.. Its something new and unique. Looking forward to see further chapters.. Great work.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Author.

Scriptamagina
ScriptamaginaLv10Scriptamagina

Well Done, Author! It is a very interesting and amazing story, I love the lead character's role. And the development of the plot is quite unique. Fighting!

Jade_Wu
Jade_WuLv1Jade_Wu

I looove iittt!! Thereโ€™s much detail!๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿฅณ

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

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KristineElias
KristineEliasLv2KristineElias

Okay, first and foremost I just want to say that this is an amazing story thus far. The chapters are long and the the writing style is very good. I love a strong female lead and it is served here. Added to library. I hope you won't drop this book. More power author!

AuHNG
AuHNGLv4AuHNG

Hm, there were some grammar mistakes, and romance isn't my cup of tea, but so far interesting. I read all the chapters so far. There were some idiosyncrasies which I found were pointless, like the *flashback*, or present day:, because they're unnecessary, but other than that. Not much else I have to say.

Sweetdreamer20
Sweetdreamer20Lv3Sweetdreamer20

WOW!!! This is just Woooooow!!!! Well done author it's beyond amazing ๐Ÿ‘ I'm at chapter 4 and I just couldn't resist the urge to share how amazing this novel is ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜€