Reviews of Twilight: Inhuman Human

Thank you for thus nice fanfic same as the above review thanks for picking rosalie as the love interest and please do update frequently........

5 Stars for Twilight, and so you don't drop. Also for picking Rosalie as the mate, just please...don't drop. I think i only know one decent Twilight ff besides the one that is popular right now. This definitely has potential, not too op, but still (as far it looks like) really strong.(Twilight standards) the others a just... boring garbage, i don't mean the good kind, where you still read it because it entertains you. Even the romance of 99,99% of the Twilight ff's are cringy sh*t, not speaking of the bad grammar, fights, update rate, etc. Btw the grammar on this one seems pretty okay.(you actually can read this without getting a a.n.a.l infection, because you understand only the half.) Just Author...don't drop.

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The author writes in a very compelling style and often thinks of things that other authors don't (an example being Jason digging his toes into the road for leverage to stop the truck), and I Find Jason's "species" to be a very exciting narrative. The characters are written well and the author actually knows quite a fair bit of trivia about twilight (him remembering Rosalie's hobby instead of disregarding her as a Bitch and a girly girl like most authors do). I'm particularly fond of the interactions between Jason and Bella her awkwardness is very well written. I'm also very pleased that the author didn't have Jason try to skirt around the action and act as if he was a mundane and oblivious human for too long. Overall, a great and well written story. My only complaint is the lack of chapters, which is less of a complaint and more of me being a greedy brat since the book is fairly new..

I'll just say one thing, please author don't drop it. Keep updating it, don't just reach the 12 chapters as always happens, I beg you not to drop it.

5 Star Review All Around... What more can I say other than I’m shooketh and hooketh. I will watch and burn the darkness that is cliff-kun!

It's suprisingly good. The best part might be that bone are perfect. Im looking forward to more. But some slow slice of life chapters to flesh out more of the characters and their quricks would make it truly top tier

This Novel is honestly, .........just Perfect. I don't know how to describe it other than with the word " perfect " because it does have good grammar. Sure, not EX-ranked Grammar :) xD but it is still better than 99% of Webnovel and is really readable and likeable. Other then that, I really love the Mc and his personality, he could have made his reveal cooler or better but that is just a personal opinion and doesn't effect the Novel by much! His Love Interest and the whole Story is really good till now and I can't wait for more. Oh, almost forgot that..... I really love it that you allow yourself to add some things like personality to the characters like you did in the 4th chapter by adding some small details to the characters. would have been boring if not :9 **: I didn't prove- read my review for false wording or grammar and I honestly don't care xD. Neither is English my Mother language so......:D

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I’ll be honest when i first seen this i only checked it out because i was bored but now i look forward to new chapters so good job. P.S. I hope y’all enjoy what he has written for us.

5stars i wanted to read one male oc fanfic with roselie but till now most writers lost their motivation and i liked what you wrote keep going and thanks for posting it

I would like to write right away that I am Russian, not a native speaker. Fan fiction is certainly well written - an interesting plot, there is no unnecessary boredom, the characters are described quite well. In general, I recommend reading it, you will not regret it.

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So far lots of potential, solid MC who is smart and also strong as ****. Solid pairings love how creepy edward sounds though and the dynamic between syblings is done really well

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Keep it up author!!👌🏾 and please don’t give up like all those twilight fanfic authors before. Btw, is Mc gonna stay as a human (immortal) or vampire since he like Rosalie.