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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721h
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    Thank you coach

    Ch 57 Coach Johansen鈥檚 Post-Match Team Talk
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h7220h
    Replied to Daoist552822

    What is that show or movie馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槶

    Click!
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h7220h
    Replied to Daichi_TBR193

    You鈥檙e not serious馃槀馃槀馃槶馃槶

    Not surprisingly, the class began to applaud my noble goal.
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h7220h
    Commented

    Pls update more

    Ch 8 First steps to conquer the world and the killing joke
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Replied to Player_Tenason

    Obviously, though it鈥檚 not a weakness since I could tell it鈥檚 strengthening him but I鈥檓 only hoping he still eats human while perfectly control his bloodlust and thirst for food.

    If Tie Ta could see himself, he would know that his veins were bulging all over his body, his muscles grew big and were tightly pressed against his skin. His body looked void of all fat, good and bad.
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Replied to Not_Yujiro_Hanma

    Bro, do people research characters in movie or shows? No, because they can鈥檛 be bothered and rather just enjoy it. So most of the survivor would only know the plot but not their weakness. Especially when they aren鈥檛 in the right state of mind.

    Jie nodded gloomily. "You couldn't imagine what we experienced in that movie. Almost twenty of us died, and everyone's death was miserable. We wanted to run. The experienced survivors led us to rob a car, then we kept driving along the highway. No one dared to sleep, and even if you fell asleep, the others would wake you up. Just like that, we lasted for five days. Then a town appeared in front of us. We drove inside the town in joy then realized this was the town in the movie! And the experienced survivor that was driving this whole time had become that demon! He laughed at us..."
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Replied to JustContemplating

    Maybe.

    Ch 19 Mistakes Were Made
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Replied to Sebastiaan

    Nah, I am a veteran reader. It鈥檚 just that this novel has huge potential so I鈥檓 just excited so I ranted a lot.馃槀馃し馃従鈥嶁檪锔

    Ch 19 Mistakes Were Made
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Replied to Loyalscum

    Fair enough. Yh I know his hair could cut bullet easily but I thought his guns were better than One Piece鈥檚 guns so his bullet could have been faster. The point is his hair is extremely powerful but not his eyes so why not keep shooting without stopping so the bullets can get through. But then I realise he鈥檚 new and doesn鈥檛 have any experience with fighting since he鈥檚 just started so I apologise. The only thing I was dissatisfied was because he got scared easily seeing he had Devil Fruit. I didn鈥檛 like that since he obviously knew he would meet one a lot but at least it was good chapter showing he got cocky and payed the price thinking everyone in East Blue was weak except Luffy鈥檚 crew and Loguetown Smoker.

    Ch 19 Mistakes Were Made
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  • s1_1h72
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    Commented

    I鈥檓 confused. Why isn鈥檛 he checking his system? Also why did he follow her order straight away when she asked for tea when he knew nothing in this world no matter if he used to contractor or personal servant before? He should of been suspicious and usually wouldn鈥檛 follow orders without answers unless he鈥檚 beta or suckers to girls.

    Ch 4 Some Questions Are Answered, Some...
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  • s1_1h72
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    He shouldn鈥檛 be that weak so why the f*ck is he scared?馃槖馃う馃従 All Devil Fruit are strong but it strongly depends on the users. And not all users are strong. He鈥檚 not even Logia or Zoan user and he can鈥檛 reflect bullets. He鈥檚 also not immune to physical damage. I mean Luffy are strong because he鈥檚 a natural at fighting and his Devil Fruit suited to him perfectly. Any other Devil Fruit wouldn鈥檛 suit him because he would rather fight up close and he鈥檚 only smart and creative in fighting but in anything else, he鈥檚 stupid. It鈥檚 very unlikely Grey Beard are natural in fighting and he鈥檚 not even popular in East Blue no matter if he鈥檚 even in One Piece canon or not. Please don鈥檛 make the main character stay lowkey and go all out. But I鈥檓ma be honest though that this chapter is almost perfect but I only don鈥檛 like that he got scared just because Grey Beard has Devil Fruit. Since he will meet a lot of people who has one so he needs to get over it.

    Ch 19 Mistakes Were Made
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Commented

    Get well soon author

    Ch 85 Update
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Commented

    What devil fruit is it?

    Ch 5 CH. 5-J枚rmungand the First Flying Snake, Sailing . . .
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
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    Please pick just one pov. Either mc or second person or third person. At the moment, you kept switching pov of the characters and ngl it鈥檚 a bit jarring.

    Ch 4 CH. 4- New Place, A Family?
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Commented

    鈥淲here am I?鈥 Not 鈥淲here.....i am?鈥. It doesn鈥檛 make sense.

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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h721d
    Commented

    Pls update more

    Ch 8 Chapter 8
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h722d
    Commented

    Update more chapter pls

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h722d
    Commented

    Another class but don鈥檛 pick dragon or shadow monarch class because it鈥檚 overused now. Pick something else. Rare one.

    Ch 9 Job Change Mission Begins
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h722d
    Commented

    Is his girlfriend gonna be future celebrity or something??馃し馃従鈥嶁檪锔忦煠佛煆锯嶁檪锔

    Zachary felt good as he crawled beneath the sheets. He slept well that night, dreaming of himself lying in a bed of dollars.
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  • s1_1h72
    s1_1h722d
    Replied to OnePun

    What kinda game is that馃ぃ馃ぃ馃槶馃ぃ

    Chu Xiaoye sighed and could only turn around. He cruelly aimed his butt at his younger brother and stuck out his tail. With a puff, he let out a smelly fart!
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