MapleLeaves
well , mc is a guy who cries about everything and one thing that's bothering is " he keeps saying is I study magic to keep people who are close to me " joke is ... he fuucking anti social , he is a Grindelwald grandson and he can't face it head on always escaping and cursing his sorry fate (it's gets real boring) expect the nun in orphanage he has no one particular to care about that to he thinks nun is hot. so.. conclusion nice concept poor presentation and a big waste of the me.
The author is clearly missing A LOT of important information, and is just twisting shit to make it 'AU' even if the stuff makes no sense. The MC is an annoying brat who can't own up to what he is and cries over stupid shit. There are way too many plot holes in this for it to be enjoyable to someone who has read MANY HP fics like me.
Really a great fan-fic, one of the finest I read. I highly recommend to read this. Even with the occasional slip ups of character by MC it fill up with the other things I especially love the part the MC goes to parties. It will be great if the author reduces the boring training part/ secret projects and let us know how MC enjoys his days at Hogwarts or other parts of the magical world.
Excellent work! Many fanfics have a tendency to add immersion-breaking explanations or dialogues that seem off. In other words, they see themselves from "the author's point of view" and not the characters. This novel completely avoids that trap (so far at least), making it much more professional like. The conversations between the different characters is vivid and well described. The language itself is not impeccable, but close to flawless. Now onto the actual review: It is a very well written and very intriguing story. It is also very immersive, I can easily picture the scenes in front of me as I read. This could very well have been passed off as a true alternative story to the original in my opinion. I liked this very much, thank you for your work.
So i havenβt read, a thing except the prologue, and i think its a great idea, just to give you a tip, you better stop, save all chapters and create a new novel under βfanfictionβ right now you are in the section βnovelβ which forces you to go premium at chapter 100-150 , and obviously you canβt go premium with copyright characters cause itβs illegal... if you continue writing here Webnovel will only remove the novel and lose everything you wrote. Transfer it fanfic section if the app
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