Review Detail of Devil_soveriegn in The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Item: The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Rating: 2

Review detail

Devil_soveriegnLv43yrDevil_soveriegn

well , mc is a guy who cries about everything and one thing that's bothering is " he keeps saying is I study magic to keep people who are close to me " joke is ... he fuucking anti social , he is a Grindelwald grandson and he can't face it head on always escaping and cursing his sorry fate (it's gets real boring) expect the nun in orphanage he has no one particular to care about that to he thinks nun is hot. so.. conclusion nice concept poor presentation and a big waste of the me.

The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

MapleLeaves

Liked by 41 people

Replies5

HopeBones5Lv15HopeBones5

LOL you should try reading up to the 4th or 5th chapter, having read up to chapter 28 I can honestly say while a bit cliche and overpowered the mc does not give off that impression later on.

3yr

Invoke_StaticLv12Invoke_Static

Are we reading the same book... He like a fair few people and he's anti social because there are people that would want revenge due to his grandfather and others that one to use him so he needs to be careful of who he becomes friends with

3yr

Infinite_Shadow_57Lv13Infinite_Shadow_57

Read at least 10-15 chapters before reviewing. From what I've read this is an amazing book.

3yr

SystemPlayzLv12SystemPlayz

From what he said he problably read past that threshold

Infinite_Shadow_57:Read at least 10-15 chapters before reviewing. From what I've read this is an amazing book.

2yr

Wintermoon5678Lv1Wintermoon5678

I think the stories good.

2yr