The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
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The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)


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What is The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic) is a popular web novel written by the author MapleLeaves, covering HARRY POTTER, REINCARNATION, FANFICTION, OP-MAIN CHARACTER, ADVENTURE, FANTASY, ACTION, MODERN, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 1M readers with an average rating of 4.42/5 and 47 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 29 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.


An unexpected tragedy happened, and a boy suddenly died. Because his death was unexpected even in the eyes of Fate, he was given a chance to reincarnate to the world of his liking. Follow the boy in his misadventures and series of misfortunes as he lives his second life while being burdened by the curse of his name. Author's notes: So this story will have slow updates as this idea was stuck in my head for a while, and I can't really find a fanfiction with this idea so I'm making one. You can even copy my idea since I don't know if I will put an end to this story. I will apologize in advance if there are grammar mistakes because English is my second language. I don't own any of J.K. Rowling's works, except my SI-OC character.


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well , mc is a guy who cries about everything and one thing that's bothering is " he keeps saying is I study magic to keep people who are close to me " joke is ... he fuucking anti social , he is a Grindelwald grandson and he can't face it head on always escaping and cursing his sorry fate (it's gets real boring) expect the nun in orphanage he has no one particular to care about that to he thinks nun is hot. so.. conclusion nice concept poor presentation and a big waste of the me.


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Giving this 5 stars because as of right now the writing is well done and easy to read. As well, I love the concept and the idea for the mc. Im very excited to see where you go with this fan fic, it has a lot of potential!


Really a great fan-fic, one of the finest I read. I highly recommend to read this. Even with the occasional slip ups of character by MC it fill up with the other things I especially love the part the MC goes to parties. It will be great if the author reduces the boring training part/ secret projects and let us know how MC enjoys his days at Hogwarts or other parts of the magical world.


Excellent work! Many fanfics have a tendency to add immersion-breaking explanations or dialogues that seem off. In other words, they see themselves from "the author's point of view" and not the characters. This novel completely avoids that trap (so far at least), making it much more professional like. The conversations between the different characters is vivid and well described. The language itself is not impeccable, but close to flawless. Now onto the actual review: It is a very well written and very intriguing story. It is also very immersive, I can easily picture the scenes in front of me as I read. This could very well have been passed off as a true alternative story to the original in my opinion. I liked this very much, thank you for your work.


The author is clearly missing A LOT of important information, and is just twisting shit to make it 'AU' even if the stuff makes no sense. The MC is an annoying brat who can't own up to what he is and cries over stupid shit. There are way too many plot holes in this for it to be enjoyable to someone who has read MANY HP fics like me.


Good story ... I enjoy it.... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


So i haven’t read, a thing except the prologue, and i think its a great idea, just to give you a tip, you better stop, save all chapters and create a new novel under “fanfiction” right now you are in the section “novel” which forces you to go premium at chapter 100-150 , and obviously you can’t go premium with copyright characters cause it’s illegal... if you continue writing here Webnovel will only remove the novel and lose everything you wrote. Transfer it fanfic section if the app






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I enjoy reading your fanfic of the Harry Potter series, I'm hoping to see more of Fred's adventures, especially in Prisoner of Azkaban and Goblet of fire.




I like this new approach here. tired of seeing regular fanfics.mc character development is good . it's a very good novel please don't drop it.


About what you would expect given the author's description. I did not have high hopes, but it was worth the read. Ideas definitely need to be better fleshed out, but the author tells you that going in.


The MC has power leveled for most of the story and spent the remainder of his time polishing of the rough edges of the younger cast. His personal goals are as of yet obscure. He has established that he wants to participate in the Tri Wiz for that sweet early emancipation, but beyond that we haven't the foggiest about what he wants out of life. This is a big detractor from his characterization. His interpersonal relationships feel very off because the MC rarely feels anything but annoyance in his interactions with the younger cast unless he is purposefully polishing off their rough edges. He definitely needs a role in this story beyond mentor and power gamer.


Writing Quality- Pretty good, barely any mistakes. Stability of Updates- Pretty stable, right now there are no updates. Story Development- So far pretty good, I've seen some plot holes and cliche's (Is that a word?) but other than that nothing. Character Design- A lot of things are very cliche. Like his wand, his pet, the way his grandfather meets him and acts, and his ideals of getting strong to protect his loved ones??? (how about previous family/loved ones? Did he lose feelings that fast??) but that's ok. But he is kinda a simp sometimes to Cho and Hermione, annoying but ok. World Background- Its Harry Potter. And there are barely any plot holes. So this story gets a 3.4 from me.


This is an epic fanfic and I hope it continues on! Such a brilliant creation by the author, the MC is awesome and the storyline is hitting it out of the park. Need to see more chapters released!!!


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its been changed a lot, like many typo, fixing grammar here and there, adding more word to make sense, giving punctuation to help the reader read, please read it and compare it with your original or raw version


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