mona_keshwari
You r taking the story in a nice rhythm, it shows us that ther's going to be some twists and interesting things once the mc is reborn, prologue the author wrote foreshadows it, it's a nice thought being different through making mc not reborn in very first chapter, it spiked my interest! need more [img=update]
Superbbbbbb Prelude there, Her dialogues, her smirk, it's like i am visualizing the scene, u describe so well. nice CS the concept, when will FL reborn and take revenge how will she, whole family seems to dote on Fenhua, why then she will be reborn, want to know eagerly, give it a read guys, u'll be interested as well. [img=recommend] [img=update]
So far 18 chapters have been published and I have read 5 chapters. The story is interesting. Yes, the idea of writing an introductory chapter right at the beginning, describing the characters who would be appearing, is good.(I have done the same in my novel). It helps the readers to connect. The story is developing well and the plot has been hinted at but will unveil later on. The stability of updates is good, Writing quality is OK. The character design and the world background is also good. All the best, Author!
It's a good story. And I can tell that the Author put a lot of thought to her characters. I also like that the characters are described in details that I can actually visualize what they would look like. Aside from that, I like the female lead's bubbly personality and the male lead's tsundere personality đđ. They are really adorable. Good job!
I think the beginning fulfills its purpose, with a good description that allowed me to imagine the situation and left me in suspense wanting more. Then I found a list of the characters and was like " great, very useful", it's great to have where to turn when I get a bit lost in other stories... the description of the characters are also clear and precise, which leads me to read without getting tired or bored. I kept me interested and wanting more. ok, I'll start listing every thought that crossed my mind as I started reading: Good title and synopsis. Good start. Good narration. Good descriptions. Good characters with a good plot. Everything you need to create a story with great potential. Continue like this author! That i want more
Hooking start author đđ read it u will nt regret it... It's flows in intrestingly making one want to read more... Wating for more.. Kep itup[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]