So far 18 chapters have been published and I have read 5 chapters. The story is interesting. Yes, the idea of writing an introductory chapter right at the beginning, describing the characters who would be appearing, is good.(I have done the same in my novel). It helps the readers to connect. The story is developing well and the plot has been hinted at but will unveil later on. The stability of updates is good, Writing quality is OK. The character design and the world background is also good. All the best, Author!
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