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You're Just My Dream

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shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12shrEk2o3

First off, I love the name of the female lead 😍 second, just reading the syno**is, I got intrigued. I love how it started, *kilig* and at the same so relatable. The writing style is also great, I felt the emotion of the character calling to me. I can't wait to read more. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED, you must read it. Keep it up author! ♥️

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TacoKun
TacoKunLv4TacoKun

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

madskie00017
madskie00017Lv11madskie00017

I have stumbled upon a diamond, a story that is so promising. The emotion being weaved along the plot and how it develops gradually is impressive. Character and world-building in the story is cleverly established. I enjoyed my time reading the story. My only concern is, there are some paragraphs that are congested and too long. Breaking them down into more comfortable to the eyes and less dragging would help the readers in building up their interest to read more. Just a suggestion! I totally recommend this story. A Must-Read! Keep Writing more

THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv2THE_WORDSMITH

I am hooked, the start was very interesting and after that, the story picks up, the transition was very smooth, the follow-up is well thought out too. If I did make any further comments that will be unraveling the elements of the story which as a reader one should be discovering by themselves. I recommend this story with all my heart. Thank you author, looking forward to the growth of Kim and Clie.

RENZ
RENZLv1RENZ

From the beginning up until the latest chapters, I saw that the chapters were well-described and I could imagine the scenes in my head. You could use more distinct character development if you wish to make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work!

MsPrangka_WP
MsPrangka_WPLv1MsPrangka_WP

Overall, it is a good story. There are a lot of questions in my head that pushed me to read the next chapters. Keep up the good work author.

Aislinn_Jasper
Aislinn_JasperLv3Aislinn_Jasper

A nice and simple story with some secrets to be revealed yet, I loved reading it. Recommended to everyone, just read it for once and you'll like it, how I enjoyed reading it. Nice work author

RAFE
RAFELv1RAFE

I'm just a starter so I can't say much. The story is brilliant, I was a little lost at the last part but thats just me. Keep up the good work💕

winterdaisy55
winterdaisy55Lv3winterdaisy55

I see you only have 1 chapter out right now so I can't really say much about it. There are some grammatical errors that I found, maybe you should use Grammarly, it helps a lot. Still, I also have a lot of grammar errors in my story so I'm not the one to talk lol. Anyway, I'm curious as to what will happen to the story, so keep going!

deepu_
deepu_Lv15deepu_

This is good.. I can't say anything as of now because there is only one chapter but there might be some heart break scenes coming in the future updates.. Good work keep it up author

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

As of the first chapter, story seems good. I can't say much about the pace or story development yet. But, yeah, the first chapter had a lot of grammatical errors. You should edit it. Keep writing!

bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3bibiyenini

When you suddenly used for the dream you want to have then suddenly God gave it to you. That was the most wonderful feeling I had, maybe the MC too, because the man became a dream came true!