Review Detail of madskie00017 in You're Just My Dream

I have stumbled upon a diamond, a story that is so promising. The emotion being weaved along the plot and how it develops gradually is impressive. Character and world-building in the story is cleverly established. I enjoyed my time reading the story. My only concern is, there are some paragraphs that are congested and too long. Breaking them down into more comfortable to the eyes and less dragging would help the readers in building up their interest to read more. Just a suggestion! I totally recommend this story. A Must-Read! Keep Writing more