Reviews of Swallowing The Spider (Linear)
Swallowing The Spider (Linear)
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Honest review, needs a lot character development improvement,MC is a WUSS that gets pushed around by some thot. I didn't finish the up to the latest chapter because it gets frustrating, MC decided to travel to Dc verse but somehow gets cancelled because of some pussy? If he somehow believed that he has bad luck for killing his parents and decided to isolate himself to other people then why get pushed around by some girl? your MC sounded like some japanese wuss that has no conviction at all! like a scenario that "mc must get revenge and in the end ends up forgiving his blood enemy ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ". have some balls dude. -its your story and you decide what to do with it. this is just my honest opinion of your work, if you somehow read this then disagree then it's your work not mine.๐ฅฑ PEACE OUTโ๏ธ
I'm going to give my honest opinion and i hope you don't take offense honestly I'm disliking your character i mean the way you made him go crazy after his parents died deciding that anyone that gets close to him will die without proof especially since it has been proved wrong when earl didn't die i mean there are plenty of kids who are actually at that young age that he was and have it a lot worse and deal with it better and get over it after some time much less a reincarnated person like him and how he became all self blaming and doubting himself with the ben parker situation i mean its pure stupid especially when he knows that ben was in fact going to get killed if he didn't do anything from his future knowledge and how he's pretty much a pussy that gets pushed around by mary jane to do what she wants and even comes to his house to annoy him into doing it without him setting her straight of course I'm not saying the story is all bad its okay and i enjoy reading it but sometimes i get really frustrated at how the character acts
This is a really good novel I want to preface my review with that positivity. The negative here which is a big negative is the level to which the main character is so ****ed up in the head. his new life parents died and he went from โoh cool Im in marvel toโ โim an emo brooding uchiha who wont speak out loud when Im not at my house and Im going to be so focused on this project I have to build a portal to other universesโ seriously He is like a worse version of sasuke after he gets the curse mark and gets mind raped by itachi again. its pretty bad and I definitely hate the main character. All of that said, the grammar, pacing, character development(of other characters like Gwen and MJ), and story design are all pretty good so if you can stomach the main character youโll probably like this novel.
The MC is too passive He might as well be a human, because he's as useless as one๐ถ๐พโโ๏ธ๐ถ๐พโโ๏ธ๐ถ๐พโโ๏ธ He has so many advantages laid out before him, Yet chooses to remain so passive that it's annoying. At the end of the day this causes the fanfic to have to no hook on the readers
hey guys can anyone comment weather MC will grow up in the DC version or not?? because frankly in case of marvel he is pretty much a wuss all the time. I have no idea if this is due to the some disease or mental problem he has that will be revealed later.. maybe, his reincarnation messed up his brain even after giving him genius IQ.??
Is a good novel for me๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The quality of the writing is excellently done. Its overall a very engaging read, binged as much as I could before I had to stop. I understand its difficult to build action sequences and talk shop in science or automation without some research, I just wish for more of Nicks thought process and experiences.
