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I'm going to give my honest opinion and i hope you don't take offense honestly I'm disliking your character i mean the way you made him go crazy after his parents died deciding that anyone that gets close to him will die without proof especially since it has been proved wrong when earl didn't die i mean there are plenty of kids who are actually at that young age that he was and have it a lot worse and deal with it better and get over it after some time much less a reincarnated person like him and how he became all self blaming and doubting himself with the ben parker situation i mean its pure stupid especially when he knows that ben was in fact going to get killed if he didn't do anything from his future knowledge and how he's pretty much a pussy that gets pushed around by mary jane to do what she wants and even comes to his house to annoy him into doing it without him setting her straight of course I'm not saying the story is all bad its okay and i enjoy reading it but sometimes i get really frustrated at how the character acts

good to see you back. noice

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thank you for your hard work so far and i hope that when things get better and you find time that you can continue the story or make a better one

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