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God story man keep it up. This story makes me want to read shadow slave good job though i hope you have a long term plan what are you going to do to rhe future of this story with such an op mc, cuz often so many stories got dropped because author do not know what to do to not make the sory boring with an op mc

Happy bornday koji san

I mean i would punch my brother in the face (before putting him to rehab forcefully) if he do drugs dont really care about healthy way to impose will or not. Like when someone close to you want to do suicide you still stop them forcibly no?

Also feels like you do that to keep the pairing single everything that is forced is not good whether its harem, single, or for the sole of the plot and character development

Good writing sadly you fked out in chap 12 making her died because of some shorts goofy ahh stroms got her ship's ass and then got burned completely unnecessary and playing cheap games with reader's feeling

Goofy ahh plot for character development

True

Dam what a critical and very descriptive 1 star rating

Man started yapping nonexistent sarcasm

Where r u man?

Hey man where are you rn? How is life?

Damn here we go in here again nice to see you back man buddy when i read your story for the first i just started high school and now i am 🤏 this close to graduation and i'd be lyng if i said i didnt forget that i had wrote a review 3 years ago Still as good as i remembered man. Stand proud you are a good writer

alrght this kinda deep

Hey bro i liked story even with the early(though i never considered that as ntr) many people just review bomb you 1 star without even reviewing your grammar story and etc Just bcause of that 1 scene so the best thing to do for me personally is well just delete their review who is yapping about hating ntr and give early ntr tags/warning. Stand your ground man your story is good your reader is a bunch of kids

One of the many reasons is probably because of one piece's manga got so many new things and story that caused the author to see the potential to do a rewrite with the new elements from the updated one piece's manga

Degenerate

Naw bro the gay jokes make me dead

Great job so far keep[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] it up dude

Lets gooo finally a baseball fic with a pitcher as the main character recently i like to read a manhwa about a baseball but would never thought to find a diamond ace fic in here