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Mesha_Aja

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2020-10-06 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja1d
    Commented

    Question🙋‍♂️ What happened to bam? And who is the love interest?

    Ch 12 Update: 100k/ Q and the madafkng A
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    Tower of God: The Enigmatic King's Story
    Anime & Comics · Nattnatt
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja3d
    Posted

    Damn this is a very good fanfic for you who want a chill and light tone story This is obviously not a serious fanfic but good enough to pass some time when you are bored

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    One piece: Unwilling Idle system user
    Anime & Comics · Anonymus_Person
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja16d
    Posted

    19 chapter and it was so good the author probably could do something with the humans and not too focusing on riku alone and make the story world development more interesting but hey i know this is just a translation. And man as a non native english speaker this is a great translation Keep it up bro

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    Invincible Demon Lord in The Anime World!
    Anime & Comics · Flame_Spirit
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja17d
    Posted

    Great story man, suitable when you're bored and want to pass some times i really recommend to read this books My criticism is well because the marvel main plot is just started make sure when the mc have a big role in the main plot you can make some marvel chara in the story dont forget how important marvel original character like tony, cap, or even gwen, etc make sure they got some parts in your story try to add some more good marvel's comic plot that suitable for the mc future plot Don't forget to not just follow the marvel plot, bend it a bit and probably make it permanent in the story And i think you need to make a few chapter/ arc about his family/close one For example gwen really got a spider power and their relationship is at strain Or his father/butler povor viewpoint about him go creative man It's just an advice don't feel obligated to do it, my point is try to make the story more exciting with some creative way (Just make sure you don't feel obligated with the reader adivice, consider whether the advice is good or bad for your story future plot/writing syle)

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    Head-Patting in Marvel
    Movies · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja2mth
    Replied to NoWoRRyMaN

    Wait, is secret killer already finished?

    Ch 118 Tania's Offer
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    Secret Killer
    Magical Realism · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja3mth
    Replied to as_ss

    I mean that is the point of fanfic isnt it? To make something different from the original just as much as you want

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    I Am Peter Parker (MARVEL AU)
    Anime & Comics · ashes_
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja3mth
    Posted

    Very good but need more spacing, i dont know for others but for me it needs more spacing cuz its in webnovel not fanfiction, webnovel is designed for a novels that have less than 5000 words maybe even less than 3000, thats why it needs more spacing than ffn who clearly can take more than enough words (5000-10000)

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    MHA: The Lazy Hero
    Anime & Comics · ImAGhost
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Replied to Exargna

    Agreed

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    Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · KnowingAutumn
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Replied to Lutheris_right

    As a non native english speaker i cant relate or understand how you feel And im glad.

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    I Reincarnated In G.I Joe
    Movies · Just_for_fun1997
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Commented

    So far so good but I think it can be better if you increase the dialogue and ibteraction between the mc and other character but If you compare this chapter with the first chapter i can see the increase in amount of dialogue

    Ch 10 The Spider Bite part 2
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    A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)
    Movies · Saintbarbido
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Posted

    My man became as straight forwardly as possible, a man of focus, commitment, and sheer will. He knew his priority. To bang black widow, what a chad

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    A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)
    Movies · Saintbarbido
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Replied to DaoOfCopying

    That was cute af, but still chibi was more cuter

    Ch 7 Consequence
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    ARCANE - LOL: Alchemist Prelude
    Video Games · MiracleWorm
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja4mth
    Replied to He_he_he5000

    You're right (i think?)

    Ch 52 Chapter 52: Forbidden Knowledge
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    Avatar: Awakened Gamer
    Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Replied to daniel_rahn

    Ah yes, doujutsu the peak of cringeness in a fanfic

    Ch 16 Choose our Mc's clothes!
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    -[Dropped]-
    Anime & Comics · AtreusRaven
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Posted

    Welcome back Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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    Star Wars: Skywalker
    Movies · Auri_EL
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Commented

    You really knows the right way and time to hype up your story huh

    Ch 39 38 - Herobrine appears
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Posted

    For me this is great and perfect you succesfully make me attached to his character and parents in only 8 chapters and it make fells so long, well done.

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    Rising Through the Fallout
    Video Games · Quade_The_Unknown
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Replied to NunyaDamBiz

    I didnt expect you would comment gawr gura lol cracked me up

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: BeastMaster64
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    Avatar: Awakened Gamer
    Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja5mth
    Commented

    Nice info

    Ch 1 Things to talk about/Disclaimer/Spoilers/...
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    Solo Levelling: The Gate Guardian
    Anime & Comics · Laplaces_dream
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  • Mesha_Aja
    Mesha_Aja6mth
    Replied to Mayorgman

    Ay, thx so much

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: PHOh My
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    The Guild of Gamers: The Supervillain
    Anime & Comics · OtakuWeibo
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