Comments of chapter undefined of SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
HIKARU_GENJI
Chapter comments31
1, 2) Story overall is quite interesting and enjoyable. 3) Harem members are great in the story and each is quite interesting, potential harem members are also interesting. 4) Sol in terms of fighting is quite developed but I think his other aspects need some more development too, but then again it has only been 68 chapter so all is good.
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HIKARU_GENJI
Opinions... 1) The storyline is on track - no doubt. Moments are quite vivid. I'd selfishly prefer that chapter plots are in sync with storyline chronology so there are little to almost no memory reversals. 2) Volume 3... I see no issues anywhere. Well, aside the holy bible, nothing is infallible so let's just say there were some one or two discrepancies here and there like expressions, mechanical accuracy as well as... should I say (hmmm, using my mouth to type, hilarious) plot organization and chapter lengths. As for the last two I mentioned, only our Dear Author and Novel Development Team know what they're doing so I have no qualms except my selfish desires not being fulfilled. 3) As for harem members, like our Dear Author stated, they're strong and independent women but I feel Sol as someone who came from our homeland called Earth, should show them who's boss by fucking their brains out, pounding them senseless and rendering them his personal cum-dumps. As they are currently stronger and more experienced, he can learn a thing or two during 'Nuptial Conclaves' from them. Due to his physique, we know we're in for an adventurous harem lifestyle where every member must cool his lust one way or the other. 4) Sol's growth overall... it began since the story's genesis and will continue until End of Story so let's say he'd kill the previous him with surprising ease if given the chance. As at now, he's strong but still too weak in the grand scheme of things therefore there's room for massive improvement. These are my selfish opinions. Don't mind me. 😁
So far, I think the story is progressing tremendously with enough importance given to all the important characters and the events surrounding them. Though selfish it may seem, I hope the release rate would be a bit faster. Overall, I have to say that I love the R-18 parts of the novel quite a lot. Excellent Work, Author.
earned instant power stone dude👌👌👌👌. Slow start but I'm good with that it's a good build up. The characters have good development and Sol's character is my favorite. he makes the same choices I would in his situation and he isn't gullible like his father was. I love every part of the story that is this. all in all keep up the good work and if you want my opinion don't make the girls betray him. At least not Milia, Setsuna and Camelia or Edea because that would suck🙏
