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stubborn_4_all4dCommentedit's too formal
The younger sister, Bellana, appeared eager to unburden herself. Yet, Blaine's protective demeanor remained steadfast, his stance unwavering as he ushered his sister towards the exit.- stubborn_4_all4dCommented
and she says this all now? sometimes I just wonder how unrealistic this has become
Hardy's lineage was traced back to one of the most distinguished families within the Kaleos faction, a fact that had initially raised high hopes and expectations for his future. However, when he was 12, he was afflicted by a debilitating condition that stunted the growth of his spirit core. This unfortunate ailment rendered him unable to cultivate and left him marginalized within his own faction, considered a disabled individual, and ultimately forgotten by those who once held aspirations for his success. - stubborn_4_all4dCommented
is this a filler arc? I gotta ask because it seems so irrelevant to the main plot the school arc is a bit alright I guess but not as interesting as emery's personal growth the only thing that actually matters is Shinta which may or may not contribute to main plot lines
Ch 2072 First Years - stubborn_4_all5dCommentedCh 2064 Decision
- stubborn_4_all5dReplied to DaoistaYVnJpCh 2063 Final Members
- stubborn_4_all5dCommented
this is utterly stupid of nephilim i do not believe the large organisations do such a thing, believe me I am very well aware or the dark side of society in real life. this is not how meticulously and vindictive the factions operate. they approach more live and let live even for subordinate organisations until extreme push comes.
Ch 2061 Choices - stubborn_4_all5dCommentedCh 2060 Learning
- stubborn_4_all8dReplied to AGodAmongMen
i shall see
I could feel the pain of my bone leaving the socket, so this couldn't be a hallucination. And just to make sure that this wasn't some simulation, I followed the signal pathway of my neurons all the way from my muscular neurons near my shoulder all the way up until they went through my spine and reached my brain. After calculating the total voltage it would take for the sensation of pain to reach my brain and seeing that's similar to the voltage change in my neurons now, I confirmed I wasn't in a simulation since my consciousness was still in my body. - stubborn_4_all9dCommented
Chapter 2040 delves into Shinta's profound emotional and physical manipulation, leaving readers questioning how she manages to seemingly recover by the chapter's end. Authors often resort to such narrative devices to drive future plot points, yet the execution in this instance falls short. The portrayal of Annara's character feels inconsistent. also for Shinta, with her initial despair swiftly transforming into resolute determination without sufficient depth in just one chapter?? The excessive manipulation employed in the narrative has led to a loss of appeal for this novel. Despite owing much to Emery, Annara's failure to disclose the truth about Shinta's father feels implausible, particularly given her own experiences of abandonment. This inconsistency begs the question of why Annara's character development couldn't have been more substantial and consistent. Moreover, the glaring absence of romance in the storyline has rendered Emery's character somewhat robotic. His analytical approach to every situation, coupled with his indifference even in non-romantic contexts, leaves much to be desired. The narrative often feels like a series of summarizations, lacking the depth and engagement needed to captivate readers. Klea's admission of her affection for Morgana is a mere fleeting mention, indicative of the overall deficiency in romantic development. It's conceivable that the author's involvement of family members in the writing process may have contributed to the neglect of romantic-comedic moments. Even Klea's attempts to encourage Gwen are cursory, consisting of only a few sentences. Emery's behavior comes across as monotonous and lacking in human emotion, meanwhile too much of his calculated strategies in dealing with adversaries. The overarching absence of romance raises questions about Emery's ultimate goals, leaving readers like me to think if romance serves merely as a means to humanize him once more. Furthermore, Emery's failure to recognize the potential advantages of cultivating a harem in a magical world seems incongruous with his otherwise astute intellect. Ultimately, he appears more akin to an ancient automaton than a relatable human character. this novels is dropping its ability to help us readers be able to immerse themselves into MC. side note: klea's wagging tails to visiting officer from magus alliance was absolute pathetic.
Ch 2040 Her Wishes - stubborn_4_all11dCommentedCh 7 Punishing a Voyeur (Yun Che x Cang Yue x Xia Qingyue)
- stubborn_4_all11dCommentedCh 6 Catching A Voyeur (Yun Che x Cang Yue x Xiao Lingxi)
- stubborn_4_all11dCommentedCh 4 Trying Something New (Yun Che x Cang Yue)
- stubborn_4_all11dCommentedCh 3 Awkward Situation (Xia Yuanba x Cang Yue x Yun Che)
- stubborn_4_all11dCommentedCh 2 Senior Sister (Xia Yuanba x Cang Yue)
- stubborn_4_all1mthCommented
yeah this doesn't feel like real life interaction, it should be more later into the story and when MC asks questions
"There wouldn't a single girl that would be able to resist your looks. And you'd be the crowd-turner wherever you go...Women would fight for you to just glance at them, and there will never be another dull moment in your life." My mom said with absolute confidence, as if she could already imagine it happening. - stubborn_4_all1mthCommented
too much monologue actually
That's a milf alright. A fine one at that...The finest I've ever seen in my entire life. - stubborn_4_all1mthCommented
you need a different sensory system to measure the current sensory system. it's here something is impossible going on. like 1+2=4.
I could feel the pain of my bone leaving the socket, so this couldn't be a hallucination. And just to make sure that this wasn't some simulation, I followed the signal pathway of my neurons all the way from my muscular neurons near my shoulder all the way up until they went through my spine and reached my brain. After calculating the total voltage it would take for the sensation of pain to reach my brain and seeing that's similar to the voltage change in my neurons now, I confirmed I wasn't in a simulation since my consciousness was still in my body. - stubborn_4_all1mthCommentedHmm? That's strange. Did I pull the plug on the wrong computer?
- stubborn_4_all1mthReplied to Love_C_raft
why don't you do it?
What Could Possibily Go Wrong?