Reviews of Ascendants

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From your synopsis, I could tell this would be an awesome story, and wow your choice of words! Did I say wow? Anyways I could feel the tense atmosphere surrounding Evangeline, from her family, past, present and probably future. Chapter 5 gave me the chills, what made that thud? What is she going to meet. I love the thrilling aspect of your story. A brief suggestion, please it's a suggestion not a command. I appreciate the simplicity of your cover but I think with a cover which would portray your story in another perspective..., it would attract others to your story, you know what the unpopular opinion which dominates, "People do judge a book by its cover!" Keep up the good work!!! Supporting you all the way

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I love how you have written the sypnosis - you made it sound really interesting which pulls the readers into your story. Hope you continue writing and keep up with the good work!!!

Very nice and interesting fantasy novel. I liked it very much. Very superb story development. Keep it up and make sure to update new chapters regularly. Great job.. Thumb's up 👍👍

only five chapters in and I'm already hooked! this is a good novel! keep it up, author! I know this is too early in the story but this is worth reading. ^^ I'll stack chapters and then binge-read.

AMMMMAAAAZIIIING Oh my... It just sucks you right in, and the descriptions? GIRLLLLL. You know what you’re doing, and if you don’t; YOU AREE DOING IT RIGHT. I don’t even know how you managed to find the right words to describe some of the feelings, because I find it astonishing how you were able to explain, almost effortlessly. Just...Wow. I have no words. P.S If you feel a little anxious to post your next chapter; afraid to do so, since sometimes the chapters don’t always have the same quality—have confidence. Orrrr...You can send it to me through discord ; D I’m gonna lay out my picnic blanket, cause I’ll be staying here for a looonggg time.

皆 Heheee Now that I have your attention. This book has been written to perfection. The words. Everything. I was hooked from the first line. Wow. Wow wow

Okay, when i was reading this book.. in the first chapter, I like the way how its descriptive and I like your writing style. keep writing :)

Nice plot. Really enjoyed it. I'm not done with it but I can barely wait to read more.🙃🙃🙃🙃☺️👊👌👌👌👌 Good work author 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

This is a great work! I love how you describe your characters emotions and thoughts. The story development is good and the plotline is interesting! I also love the flow of your writing, it's clear and not all over the place. A bit more information about the setting would be good but it's definitely a worthy read!

You made a good sense of using atmospheric dread as a device to propel this story. I like how the family mystery all comes into play here. Beautiful written and the character interactions are engaging and feels genuine.

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Really love the writing style you have here. Natties gunna have a decision to make xD. Love the world and the characters! Keep it up! Can't wait for more

The book has a very confusing start, it's really hard to catch on but the emotions added on the chapter is really good. Maybe add some more info about the world.

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I don't know but your story is so good and I can't wait for you to post some chapters again. Because they way you told the characters story is superb. I liked it. Keep on writing author!!~

well written with strong narrative sense, but the author has made something that is pretty fatal. Which is the usage of the brands, the brand is something forbidden for being mentioned in the novel. Except when we have the partnership deal with them. other than that, it looks good so far. looking forward to your next chapters.

love how the synopsis dragged me into reading this!! just a little bit of tweaking required here and there; for instance, the paragraphs shouldn’t be longer than required. and the updating schedule should be maintained. otherwise good job!!

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