Phiara... That's a very interesting name OwO

I meant... that the 'cat'...

That the small 'cat' OwO just a pointer

Very interesting way to start a story OwO Looking forward for more... Chapter 2, here I come!

It's really interesting how you started this whole story and it pulled me in instantly, making me want to keep reading! I love the characters so far, I see no mistakes and very interesting story (even though there's just a few chapters up) I believe that this book will be a great one! Keep up the good work author!

What a terrifying first battle ಥ‿ಥ

Wahahhaha 😂 that was unexpected

I like how descriptive you are and I love how you made the helper thingy dumb 😂

Very interesting

I don't really read system type books but this is really interesting OwO

...and all 'of' the world's... minor mistake but we all make them so it's fine :3

OmO the way you ended the chapter just makes me want to keep reading!

O.O this is a very interesting way to start a book, it pulls readers in! Keep up the good work!

OmO The way you started your story is just so intriguing and interesting that I couldn't stop turning the page to see what happens next OwO I love the characters already, even though it's just been a few chapters O>O This book is a great one and I recommend it to those who are interested in this kind of genre. Keep up the good work author!

Just reading the first chappy already sparked my interest. Very interesting way to start a novel! I have to admit... You captured my personality nicely OwO Keep up the good work author! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

awweee, *pat pat

exactly

haha thank you OwO

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Aww, thank you very much!