Review Detail of Bloom759 in Ascendants

From your synopsis, I could tell this would be an awesome story, and wow your choice of words! Did I say wow? Anyways I could feel the tense atmosphere surrounding Evangeline, from her family, past, present and probably future. Chapter 5 gave me the chills, what made that thud? What is she going to meet. I love the thrilling aspect of your story. A brief suggestion, please it's a suggestion not a command. I appreciate the simplicity of your cover but I think with a cover which would portray your story in another perspective..., it would attract others to your story, you know what the unpopular opinion which dominates, "People do judge a book by its cover!" Keep up the good work!!! Supporting you all the way