Review Detail of Nicole_99 in Ascendants

The first half of the first chapter left me confused as I found it a little hard to take in all the thoughts she was having without fully understanding what she went through. The part where she met Alex was described in such a way that even the word lovely wouldn't suffice. I don't know how you did it but I loved the way the words just fall into place so nicely. Towards the bottom half of the chapter, the prior turmoil the main character was in comes to light as we can see how she is struggling to cope with the loss of someone precious. I know you described him as just leaving but there is a sense of loss for the people left behind after all. This story not only tackles the story of someone struggling through a depressive state due to the loss of someone previous, it also brings to light that self harm is only a momentary help to release that pain. I found this story really well written and hope that you would keep up the good work.