Reviews of A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy
A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy
_Daulla
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Hi, it's me here, your author. NOTE--- 1- I like details so I am gonna add a lot of it. 2-I know mc is dumb. 3-If you think this will be a typical necromancy story with a system then you are wrong. I don't like system novels and it will contain its necromantic elements but you need to be patient lol. 4- My grammar isn't da best but it isn't that bad that it's unreadable. 5- If you like, read it and if you don't drop it. 6- Genuine comments and review are accepted. 7- I don't mind if you point out my mistake but hate comments are not acceptable. 8- This is full of mysteries and fantasy elements so I need to make it full of details so you guys can catch ques of story lol. 9- Hope you all love Severus. Happy reading! Regards
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Sugar coating is not my style, so I'll be very blunt in this review. I'll focus on dialogue, an aspect that I find many authors struggling with. Story is interesting, but the dialogues are a bit robotic, for example when Shemmi and Gemmi are speaking, they are very polite, even with all the curses and stuff. For dialogue, don't worry about the grammar and think of these characters as actual people and think of how you would speak to your friends. Eg: "If I get what I am searching for, then don't even dare come in front of me asking for shares" Why say that when you can say: "When I find it, don't you f**king dare come asking for shares, got it?!" My improvisation makes the dialogue more casual and shows off the dude's rogue nature. Meanwhile, yours makes the character seem too sophisticated, and on top of that, the sentence is unclear. So you might need to proofread your work a few more times too. Author san, you have so many positive reviews, so I thought I would share a bit criticism instead. But don't fret! Your work is promising, and I'll add this to my library for further reading~ Good luck!
The plot and characters themselves are fine, but the grammar, style, and quality of writing have me almost constantly cringing. I bet it’s a good story, but it’s kinda terrible writing if I have to be honest. Maybe I’ve been spoiled by the writing in other books, but I cannot bring myself to keep reading this book.
couldn't make it past chapter 17. this the most cringey tripe I've ever read. like if it was a little cringey i could deal with it, if it was at least interesting... but honestly at least up to chap 17 there aren't any. the mc is a boring person who's got less character than the side characters who only briefly make an appearance. I'm sure it probably gets better at some point... but i can't push through the poor writing and boring mc
Hello, hello. AHem..Cough cough..Ahem...sorry for that. So, here I go. I will say this again, I suck at reviewing but I am still doing it. Don't mind me. I will say some things about the novel. As of now, there are only 6 chapters out, but I am already hooked on the novel. I am sure that the bird character named, NOworry Raven is an awesome character. I read for him only. Writing quatily- awesome. There are no grammer erros whatsoever and its fun to read. Stabilty of updates- 1 chap every day is more than enough. Story development - Its intriguing. Want to know more, can't wait for more chaps. Character design - Awesome, I can imagine the character how the author is trying to describe. World background- well, what do I say here? World is world. Over all, a good novel. Good story. Good writing. Good job author, please write morea and keep updating. . . . . . . I am a shameless guy. I do shameless things, but I need to prove my shamelessness. So, this shameless witll shamelessly, do a shameless promotion. So my shamelessness can be proved. .
This story is so interesting that I just want to keep reading it...... Writing quality is really nice and the chapters are updated regularly which is something that all of us prefer ofcourse (hehe). The story is really nice and addicting....once a reader starts reading....he/she will want more and more and more....so dear author please keep writing just addiction chapters daily :p The characters are well designed and the world background is beautifully described. And my favourite character in this novel is Raven Noworry...hehe. Our dear author has done a great job. Keep up the good work and please update MOREEEE........
Combining the western fantasy and the eastern cultivation world, The one that read this review might be confused with what I'm talking about but there is some aspect that is mostly used in eastern cultivation world. Anyway, the character design is good enuff, I could say it's a 5 stars and the writing quality is excellent! I could feel emotion in my deepest part of my body began rising up upon seeing those text. The other is good even though I can't say it's flawless, good job Daulla and keep up on writing. Don't give up even if your work is not appreciated by the reader like my story
The writing quality is damn awesome. I am already hooked to this story, I wanna read more. I want more... The updates are stable, so no worry. (wink)[Pun intended] haha, You will know once you read it. Also, world background is clear, and the characters are fun and mature. I won't be telling anything more. Just go on and read it. You will never regret reading this book.
Well... can’t give a review without reading much but there are only 8 chapters but I like it so I wanted to share this with you. I recommend reading it. It has necromancer in the rags so I tried it and wow it was great. Read it u won’t regret it. If u do then it’s because u don’t like what u read so don’t give bad reviews for fun
Completely in love with the story and more than anything I liked the Raven noworry. Plot of this novel is completely different than any other story, no cliche and a mix of all tastes. It has magic elements, a lil of dark plot, humour elements (I like the most) and lot of action and adventure. Keep up the good work author.(◍•ᴗ•◍) And update daily.(≧▽≦) If you won't then get ready for a 1 star. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
