Item: A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy
Rating: 5

BurntPotatoesLv103yr

2021-04-08 05:15

i would say this book is pretty good the storyline is quite interesting character design is pretty good blah blah blah however i think it needs more action to it would still give 5 stars tho

A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy

_Daulla

4.7

236 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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Ace_AxelLv1

Hello there, since last year my friend is writing a book. His book is about bloodlines, kingdoms, and superpowers. The problem is he is not getting any support. I told him to share on a couple of sites but it didn't get any attention. If you guys can check that out and leave a comment it would be really good for him. Have a good day. The book's name is: Wolf Bloodline

3yr

Other Reviews

_DaullaAuthor

Hi, it's me here, your author. NOTE--- 1- I like details so I am gonna add a lot of it. 2-I know mc is dumb. 3-If you think this will be a typical necromancy story with a system then you are wrong. I don't like system novels and it will contain its necromantic elements but you need to be patient lol. 4- My grammar isn't da best but it isn't that bad that it's unreadable. 5- If you like, read it and if you don't drop it. 6- Genuine comments and review are accepted. 7- I don't mind if you point out my mistake but hate comments are not acceptable. 8- This is full of mysteries and fantasy elements so I need to make it full of details so you guys can catch ques of story lol. 9- Hope you all love Severus. Happy reading! Regards

4yr

_DaullaAuthor

I guess, a little self love doesn't harm. Hey , i am the author of this novel and would request all the readers to give a read to my novel. Feel free to leave any comments and queries if you have any. This author here is a chatty type, so dun hold back while talking. I wish everyone a good day.

4yr

_VA_Lv4

Sugar coating is not my style, so I'll be very blunt in this review. I'll focus on dialogue, an aspect that I find many authors struggling with. Story is interesting, but the dialogues are a bit robotic, for example when Shemmi and Gemmi are speaking, they are very polite, even with all the curses and stuff. For dialogue, don't worry about the grammar and think of these characters as actual people and think of how you would speak to your friends. Eg: "If I get what I am searching for, then don't even dare come in front of me asking for shares" Why say that when you can say: "When I find it, don't you f**king dare come asking for shares, got it?!" My improvisation makes the dialogue more casual and shows off the dude's rogue nature. Meanwhile, yours makes the character seem too sophisticated, and on top of that, the sentence is unclear. So you might need to proofread your work a few more times too. Author san, you have so many positive reviews, so I thought I would share a bit criticism instead. But don't fret! Your work is promising, and I'll add this to my library for further reading~ Good luck!

4yr

Bird_0f_HermesLv4

I love the story soo much. Though its the first chapter, I think I'm in love ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ Readu the story! Keep it up, Author-tan~ I will read till the end~

4yr

DiophantineLv12

The plot and characters themselves are fine, but the grammar, style, and quality of writing have me almost constantly cringing. I bet it’s a good story, but it’s kinda terrible writing if I have to be honest. Maybe I’ve been spoiled by the writing in other books, but I cannot bring myself to keep reading this book.

4yr

DreamstrafeLv15

couldn't make it past chapter 17. this the most cringey tripe I've ever read. like if it was a little cringey i could deal with it, if it was at least interesting... but honestly at least up to chap 17 there aren't any. the mc is a boring person who's got less character than the side characters who only briefly make an appearance. I'm sure it probably gets better at some point... but i can't push through the poor writing and boring mc

3yr

NoWoRRyMaNLv14

Hello, hello. AHem..Cough cough..Ahem...sorry for that. So, here I go. I will say this again, I suck at reviewing but I am still doing it. Don't mind me. I will say some things about the novel. As of now, there are only 6 chapters out, but I am already hooked on the novel. I am sure that the bird character named, NOworry Raven is an awesome character. I read for him only. Writing quatily- awesome. There are no grammer erros whatsoever and its fun to read. Stabilty of updates- 1 chap every day is more than enough. Story development - Its intriguing. Want to know more, can't wait for more chaps. Character design - Awesome, I can imagine the character how the author is trying to describe. World background- well, what do I say here? World is world. Over all, a good novel. Good story. Good writing. Good job author, please write morea and keep updating. . . . . . . I am a shameless guy. I do shameless things, but I need to prove my shamelessness. So, this shameless witll shamelessly, do a shameless promotion. So my shamelessness can be proved. .

4yr

EmpressSKLv5

This story is so interesting that I just want to keep reading it...... Writing quality is really nice and the chapters are updated regularly which is something that all of us prefer ofcourse (hehe). The story is really nice and addicting....once a reader starts reading....he/she will want more and more and more....so dear author please keep writing just addiction chapters daily :p The characters are well designed and the world background is beautifully described. And my favourite character in this novel is Raven Noworry...hehe. Our dear author has done a great job. Keep up the good work and please update MOREEEE........

4yr

The_OwlLv2

I'm already in love with the story. I don't know about anything else, but do give it a try~ New concepts always makes you want to keep reading. Lub you author-tan~ Keep it up.

4yr

Sankalp_VermaLv3

This book is worth another review it is so good and author is managing to upload chaps daily which is very good and belive me this is the only book that I have ever read and have been reading . Seeya.

3yr

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