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_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor4yr
2020-07-31 12:37

I guess, a little self love doesn't harm. Hey , i am the author of this novel and would request all the readers to give a read to my novel. Feel free to leave any comments and queries if you have any. This author here is a chatty type, so dun hold back while talking. I wish everyone a good day.

A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy

_Daulla
4.7
236 Chs

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raven2004
raven2004Lv15

is this yaoi?

4yr
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_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

No😂😂😂😂😂

raven2004:is this yaoi?
4yr
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_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

No😂😂😂😂😂

raven2004:is this yaoi?
4yr
3
PrinceofLightning
PrinceofLightningLv3

I wish u best in this journey

4yr
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MapleHound
MapleHoundLv15

*his* interaction with the opposite *** is zero except for the crown *prince* and finance, Melanie*,*. Prince or Princess?? also that second , should be replaced with just a . Other than that I think the synopsis is great! will read tomorrow. First...sleep (4:30am fk me where did the time go??)

4yr
4
Cory_Travis
Cory_TravisLv14

Haven’t read this yet but looking at the description he’s gonna have a good amount of girls on here so I wanna know is he a dense idiot or is he actually gonna respond to their feeling and get with them??

4yr
3
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

Author on the scale of 1 to 10 honestly rate your grammer

4yr
Tsuzuna
TsuzunaLv13

I mean you can have nad grammar but to write "no opposite *** contact except crown Prince and his finance" takes some skill (I'm on phone and can't copy paste exact sentence easily but kept the errors as is)

LazyCloudBC:Author on the scale of 1 to 10 honestly rate your grammer
4yr
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

👍👍

Tsuzuna:I mean you can have nad grammar but to write "no opposite *** contact except crown Prince and his finance" takes some skill (I'm on phone and can't copy paste exact sentence easily but kept the errors as is)
4yr
SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

will it eventually end up in a harem? I'd rather the mc has a harem than a bunch of girls thristy for him chasing him around

4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

Lol, I am not a harem lover person. Let's see what happens in future . 😂🍭

SerBlueom:will it eventually end up in a harem? I'd rather the mc has a harem than a bunch of girls thristy for him chasing him around
4yr
2
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

_Daulla:Lol, I am not a harem lover person. Let's see what happens in future . 😂🍭
4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

yea , my bad 🍭

MapleHound:*his* interaction with the opposite *** is zero except for the crown *prince* and finance, Melanie*,*. Prince or Princess?? also that second , should be replaced with just a . Other than that I think the synopsis is great! will read tomorrow. First...sleep (4:30am fk me where did the time go??)
4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

He is dense idiot but Severus is a person of integrity, I doubt he will play with women's lol😂🍭

Cory_Travis:Haven’t read this yet but looking at the description he’s gonna have a good amount of girls on here so I wanna know is he a dense idiot or is he actually gonna respond to their feeling and get with them??
4yr
1
MapleHound
MapleHoundLv15

oh yeah btw...it's spelt fiance not finance. finance = money

_Daulla:yea , my bad 🍭
4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

Honestly I would rate my grammar 8 but not in context of this story. you know while writing our brains gets so drained that when we proofread our chapters again, the eyes and brain both shut downs. They just stop working 😂😂😂.. .so I case of story I would scale it 6 😿

LazyCloudBC:Author on the scale of 1 to 10 honestly rate your grammer
4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

pardon please, what is nad grammar. Some skulls you got there, I NVR knew there is a type of grammar called nad grammar🍭

4yr
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

thanks for pointing out, feels so good when readers are so helpful 🍭

MapleHound:oh yeah btw...it's spelt fiance not finance. finance = money
4yr
1
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

*skills

_Daulla:pardon please, what is nad grammar. Some skulls you got there, I NVR knew there is a type of grammar called nad grammar🍭
4yr
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

👍👍👍👍👍 I belive in you...👍👍👍🐶

_Daulla:Honestly I would rate my grammar 8 but not in context of this story. you know while writing our brains gets so drained that when we proofread our chapters again, the eyes and brain both shut downs. They just stop working 😂😂😂.. .so I case of story I would scale it 6 😿
4yr
Other Reviews
_Daulla
_DaullaAuthor

Hi, it's me here, your author. NOTE--- 1- I like details so I am gonna add a lot of it. 2-I know mc is dumb. 3-If you think this will be a typical necromancy story with a system then you are wrong. I don't like system novels and it will contain its necromantic elements but you need to be patient lol. 4- My grammar isn't da best but it isn't that bad that it's unreadable. 5- If you like, read it and if you don't drop it. 6- Genuine comments and review are accepted. 7- I don't mind if you point out my mistake but hate comments are not acceptable. 8- This is full of mysteries and fantasy elements so I need to make it full of details so you guys can catch ques of story lol. 9- Hope you all love Severus. Happy reading! Regards

4yr

_VA_
_VA_Lv4

Sugar coating is not my style, so I'll be very blunt in this review. I'll focus on dialogue, an aspect that I find many authors struggling with. Story is interesting, but the dialogues are a bit robotic, for example when Shemmi and Gemmi are speaking, they are very polite, even with all the curses and stuff. For dialogue, don't worry about the grammar and think of these characters as actual people and think of how you would speak to your friends. Eg: "If I get what I am searching for, then don't even dare come in front of me asking for shares" Why say that when you can say: "When I find it, don't you f**king dare come asking for shares, got it?!" My improvisation makes the dialogue more casual and shows off the dude's rogue nature. Meanwhile, yours makes the character seem too sophisticated, and on top of that, the sentence is unclear. So you might need to proofread your work a few more times too. Author san, you have so many positive reviews, so I thought I would share a bit criticism instead. But don't fret! Your work is promising, and I'll add this to my library for further reading~ Good luck!

4yr
Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4

I love the story soo much. Though its the first chapter, I think I'm in love ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ Readu the story! Keep it up, Author-tan~ I will read till the end~

4yr
Diophantine
DiophantineLv12

The plot and characters themselves are fine, but the grammar, style, and quality of writing have me almost constantly cringing. I bet it’s a good story, but it’s kinda terrible writing if I have to be honest. Maybe I’ve been spoiled by the writing in other books, but I cannot bring myself to keep reading this book.

4yr
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

couldn't make it past chapter 17. this the most cringey tripe I've ever read. like if it was a little cringey i could deal with it, if it was at least interesting... but honestly at least up to chap 17 there aren't any. the mc is a boring person who's got less character than the side characters who only briefly make an appearance. I'm sure it probably gets better at some point... but i can't push through the poor writing and boring mc

3yr
NoWoRRyMaN
NoWoRRyMaNLv14

Hello, hello. AHem..Cough cough..Ahem...sorry for that. So, here I go. I will say this again, I suck at reviewing but I am still doing it. Don't mind me. I will say some things about the novel. As of now, there are only 6 chapters out, but I am already hooked on the novel. I am sure that the bird character named, NOworry Raven is an awesome character. I read for him only. Writing quatily- awesome. There are no grammer erros whatsoever and its fun to read. Stabilty of updates- 1 chap every day is more than enough. Story development - Its intriguing. Want to know more, can't wait for more chaps. Character design - Awesome, I can imagine the character how the author is trying to describe. World background- well, what do I say here? World is world. Over all, a good novel. Good story. Good writing. Good job author, please write morea and keep updating. . . . . . . I am a shameless guy. I do shameless things, but I need to prove my shamelessness. So, this shameless witll shamelessly, do a shameless promotion. So my shamelessness can be proved. .

4yr
EmpressSK
EmpressSKLv5

This story is so interesting that I just want to keep reading it...... Writing quality is really nice and the chapters are updated regularly which is something that all of us prefer ofcourse (hehe). The story is really nice and addicting....once a reader starts reading....he/she will want more and more and more....so dear author please keep writing just addiction chapters daily :p The characters are well designed and the world background is beautifully described. And my favourite character in this novel is Raven Noworry...hehe. Our dear author has done a great job. Keep up the good work and please update MOREEEE........

4yr
The_Owl
The_OwlLv2

I'm already in love with the story. I don't know about anything else, but do give it a try~ New concepts always makes you want to keep reading. Lub you author-tan~ Keep it up.

4yr
Sankalp_Verma
Sankalp_VermaLv3

This book is worth another review it is so good and author is managing to upload chaps daily which is very good and belive me this is the only book that I have ever read and have been reading . Seeya.

4yr
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