Reviews of My Space-Time System

Late teenage mc with the emotions of a small child and the attention span of a goldfish The novel Is called space and time system but has nothing to do with space and time.

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Had to get very an honest review her and I have to say, this work has a lot of potential. Interesting storyline, a nice and MC and a lot more. Though I feel it could be better, for an original story it is already amazing.

Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.

So I read all the free chapters which was like 40 something. From what I could read, there is so much to work on, just in the beginning chapters. Author should go back and fix it and if the rest of the novel is like this then it's not worth reading in my opinion. Lots of inconsistencies and information being put out with no explanation like Magic. It hurt to read it and this is as far as I go. GL

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I wanted to like it. and it's not like it's bad or anything, it's just far from what it could be. The mc got a pretty op pathon day one but never uses it. I think it was used only once or twice by chap 70 even though there's so much that it could be used for. instead, the mc is so reliant on the system for anything and everything, even stuff that his own power could be used for. This is supposed to be some top notch gamer but in his new world, all he does is basically use the wiki and a walkthrough. The mc needs to think for himself rather than have an all-knowing system spell every little thing out for him. --- Possibly spoiler below--- back to his starting path, it's so op if he even thinks about it for a second. He can find literally anything he wants but instead uses the system for everything he could be doing himself. locate enemies nearby? his path could do it but uses the system instead. find an enemies weak point? that's something that his power could do. find a good place to cultivate? find some good treasure? find the beast core? find the best spot to hit the hammer while smithing? literally anything to do with locating something, he should be able to do with his path, yet he has the system to do all of that and more anyways. what's the point of giving him op powers if he literally never uses it? and look, maybe he finally decides to later on. who knows? he hasn't used it by chap 70 so anything else is just too late. too bad because it could have been much better

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In my opinion it has solid world and character development shown throughout the whole 388 chapters, I have read this far. Even "Nobody"-Backgroundcharakters sometimes get their moments and their background is explained which at first seemed overdoing it but after so many chapters I get to enjoy every last bit of world background, charakter development and every background story, no matter if about our beloved mc, the world, some sidecharakter or one of the friends of the protagonist. There are some mistaked and evey now and then the measurements don't make that much of a sense, because in the beginning it was switching between them every now and then, but for the last few chapters I did not find anything like that so, even that got solved :)

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This is a story with a very nice plot, it has a huge amount of untapped potential. Author I hope you utilise it well, overall it's a nice work.

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Thirty(ish) chapters in. There are a few errors in the translating (missing words, or words that sound similiar but mean something completely different), but the background of the world is well developed. Not a lot of character development going on for the main though. He seems static currently, while the supporting characters are growing.

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