Review Detail of Dodge_Buddy_2194 in My Space-Time System

It is very hard to write about time and space, so not many authors are brave enough to do it. I give you props for trying Pros: The premis is good and the story is moving along. Cons: The characters are flat and have no enotions. They are about to fly on a large eagle and his 2 companions close their eyes to sleep? Where is the awe, excitement, fear? this already was a red flag about how the book was written. They get to the city and he already knows what the statue’s name is? There needs to be a bit of mystery and character interaction were he find out who it is. You need stop giving the main character everything because it’s unbelievable. This book is probably good for begining readers but for readers like me who have hundreds of hours reading, this book is too simple with no twists and turns, no excitement.