Reviews of Millennium Tension
Millennium Tension
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Me: "An author who supports his own novel! Incredible! 5 stars! Praise~" Heart Demon: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one?" Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this confidence!" Heart Demon: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk." Me: "You are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*" Heart Demon: "With your writing skill that is just like that, I wonder why you could get a contract in your first month writing a novel." Me: "Maybe I have a handful of Lord Rito's luck? Why didn't you read more than 40 chapters? My talents improved afterward." Kind Spirit: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try." Me: "My kind spirit! *hug* You're so kind, not like that ****ty demon over there." Heart Demon: "Tsk!" Kind Spirit: "So, what's the storyline?" Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his AI who already has a real human body and his clingy daughter exploring the universe, and also to find out why mutations occur on Earth, but a bigger scheme that will force them to be involved will be triggered when they succeed in stopping mutations on Earth ... " Kind Spirit: "What's the sequel?" Me: "I won't give you a spoiler~" Kind Spirit: "Fine. So this is a harem, right?" Me: "That's right, as tag-chan said. So those who don't like a harem can skip this novel. Oh yeah, this isn't R-18 either, ok?" Heart Demon: "What!? Harem without R-18 and smut!? How evil you are! I just made my horny license yesterday!" Me: "Well, maybe implicitly. *smirk*" Heart Demon: "That's not enough! I need lots of research material!" Me: "Err... Then just spend your horny hours somewhere else." Thank you for reading this review containing a strange conversation between Me, Heart Demon, and Kind Spirit.
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After reading this novel for a while, I came to the following conclusions * The character design is good and nice * The world design is weird and skewed * The story consistency is bad, seriously please improve upon it * Characters are inconsistent * Concept for the story is very good though Overall, after a rewrite or heavy revision of chapter this can be a great story.
The concept is interesting! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) To take some examples from the first chapter: "...relationships can affect how severe" (present-tense) "But this case looks" (present-tense) "This situation confused Aizen" (past-tense) "...now he hasn't remarried" (present-tense) "hard work paid off" (past-tense) "Aizen succeeded in creating" (past-tense) There are also some other grammatical issues, but the writing quality in this novel is still better than 90% of the other novels on this site. The writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.
First of all, wow the world build up is really impressive for me, although it does need a bit of polishing but I can visualize the descriptions very well. And the MC is has a really interesting life start so far. This is my first Scifi book and I'm enjoying it right from the start, great job! Keep writinggg~ 👍💖
Oohhh 🙊🙊 This is an interesting read... A transmigration and sci-fi?? Highly recommended. I often read sci-fi with ML as the protagonist and enjoyed this one.... Axel is an interesting character and also Aizen too. The world structure is written so well and I enjoyed reading it (until chapter 12). So far, the story intrigued me and I'll keep it in my reading list. 😍😍🙉🙉
Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!! Very good novel but why does it discontinued??????.......... Hey authorrrrrr are still thereNn????!!!
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A novel that is both unique and intriguing to me personally. I love when people are able to combine sci-fi and cultivation to an acceptable degree. The grammar ain't 'perfect', but the errors are few and far between. Looking into the story, characters, and the world, it easy to see that the author has put effort into these categories. So I say... good work author 👍 I hope more people discover your work in the future.
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