After reading this novel for a while, I came to the following conclusions * The character design is good and nice * The world design is weird and skewed * The story consistency is bad, seriously please improve upon it * Characters are inconsistent * Concept for the story is very good though Overall, after a rewrite or heavy revision of chapter this can be a great story.
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