Review Detail of Ancient_Egyptian in Millennium Tension
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I think it is important to note that the world background and the characters design is so unorganized so, please try hard to build a good world. Thanks.
Millennium Tension
YuuZu
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YuuZu:Thanks for your review. I will recheck and try explaining things as time goes.
YuuZu:Thanks for your review. I will recheck and try explaining things as time goes.
ImmortalAutarch:Did the character Ana experiment with live humans to achieve her goals ?
So she murdered people just for her experiments!? Does she not care about how the family members of the person who is being tortured feels even though she understands what losing a loved is like?
YuuZu:In the past Yes, but failed
I didn't write any torture or any inhuman act. đ But what crazy experimental she did, I just leave it to the readers to imagine.
ImmortalAutarch:So she murdered people just for her experiments!? Does she not care about how the family members of the person who is being tortured feels even though she understands what losing a loved is like?
I see . But isnt experimenting on humans considered inhuman though ? Like when you used the word crazy experiments and combining the fact that she used humans as research material for those experiments.... it sort of had a negative ring to it and so that's why I thought she did inhuman or torturous acts . Its not like I cant tolerate dark activities in a story but usually while I prefer MCs who are not naive and are neutral , I kind of can't stand dark main characters cause I just can't get behind their cause or enjoying their adventure. Thats just me ofc and thats why I avoid evil mcs lol.
YuuZu:I didn't write any torture or any inhuman act. đ But what crazy experimental she did, I just leave it to the readers to imagine.
Hehe đ Thank you for your opinion. I also think so. Worry not, this is about mc and his group got pulled to become heroes. đ
ImmortalAutarch:I see . But isnt experimenting on humans considered inhuman though ? Like when you used the word crazy experiments and combining the fact that she used humans as research material for those experiments.... it sort of had a negative ring to it and so that's why I thought she did inhuman or torturous acts . Its not like I cant tolerate dark activities in a story but usually while I prefer MCs who are not naive and are neutral , I kind of can't stand dark main characters cause I just can't get behind their cause or enjoying their adventure. Thats just me ofc and thats why I avoid evil mcs lol.
then what if the world is on verge of Apocalypse there are so many zombies and humans got the ability to fight them but there is a doctor that kills hundreds or thousands of lives just to experiment and to make a cure. He sacrifices all his time, life and kidnaps and kills for his experiment, and he succeeded in making the cure. is that evil? not related to the story but this is another novel
ImmortalAutarch:I see . But isnt experimenting on humans considered inhuman though ? Like when you used the word crazy experiments and combining the fact that she used humans as research material for those experiments.... it sort of had a negative ring to it and so that's why I thought she did inhuman or torturous acts . Its not like I cant tolerate dark activities in a story but usually while I prefer MCs who are not naive and are neutral , I kind of can't stand dark main characters cause I just can't get behind their cause or enjoying their adventure. Thats just me ofc and thats why I avoid evil mcs lol.