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It seems like a super cliche boring story but it's actually surprisingly interesting. This is what happens when a logical person ends up in these stories. Instead of all the dumbass **** the original MC did, this MC uses his background from the start and acts like an ACTUAL soldier king. I say give it a read.
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Although it is an interesting story, it leaves much to be desired in writing quality. It feels like the story is a product of Google translate. Although the same style of writing is seen on author notes so it probably isn't Google translate. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone older than 18, would be too childish for most people.
This is actually really good. 5/5 for writing and story development since I like this more than the original. (What a shame to the original author) 4/5 for world background since this is a fanfic 5/5 for character design since MC has good head and do logical actions, not some ****ty typical you-know-what-MC I am not actually a fan of harem thing but this is good, unexpected for me Keep up the good work Author-san, don't tire yourself~
Usually i dont write reviews on this site , but for this i made an exception. To start of in the inital chapters the MC gets reincarnated and straight up goes doing whatever the fudge, character interaction is trash, almost **** logic. The theres character development , made me cringe soo hard ugh >.< after which **** logic applies to the whole universe , it was bad enough in the original but in the original there was some flow to the story, this just straight up next level bull****. World is not explored at all and other main leads in the story are just props. gg i hope u improve ur writing skill author. until then i would advice against reading this if you want a good quality fanfic gg
Author you don't have to worry about such things, I am a avid reader of fanfics and I think you are one of the best writers I have seen as a fan I definitely can't wait for more chapters in this story and even the other story that you are talking about so please have a lot of confidence in you as I think you are even better than some of the real writers....
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Great fanfic specially when you read the original one. Well the harem is still there but not to the point that every chapter theres a new one. And the H-scenes are much less here compared to the original which in my opinion is good because the MC in the original was always fxcking. And I also love how Yang Chen here use his power in much more realistic way than the original one cause the original doesn't really use much of his power and always get annoyed by normal humans like you are a god just kill them already and be done with it.
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This fanfic is gooodd even if you guys havent red the original you would still love this. Honestly, this is much more relaxing than the original since the original was honestly a roller coaster of emotion. There, you would always find yourself stressed like there is always misunderstandings between the couples and the way the mc treat the other girls is bad in a way.
ill be honest, this is WAY better then the original. Why? bcz 1. Mc is not a **** character who think with his lower half and still thinks he love his wife and is not doing anything wrong to her. 2.If Once MC gets together with his wife, he doesnt go and fk every girl he sees like from the original where he got his relationship on the right track then just to go other country to fk a girl. 3. and the MOST important part..MC is not a dick head who only knows how to have sex. He knows that this guy going to be prob. then kill him unlike original where he literally knows but still act like everything will work out. Anyway ill highly recommend this fanfic, specially to those who have read the original book. And i want more author plzzz dont stop writing,,