This is actually really good. 5/5 for writing and story development since I like this more than the original. (What a shame to the original author) 4/5 for world background since this is a fanfic 5/5 for character design since MC has good head and do logical actions, not some ****ty typical you-know-what-MC I am not actually a fan of harem thing but this is good, unexpected for me Keep up the good work Author-san, don't tire yourself~
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