Harry Potter but AU???

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it could have been interesting if everything was not either cliche or without commun sense. But god the dialogue are awful, il make everything hard to read

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First what I do not care for..I hate when writers make an HP fan fiction and make muggles and science BETTER than magic [Its like saying a nuke is better than a wish from God] it takes away from what JKR created. That said if you do not mind this mind set than its a good read, AUs are refreshing.

The writing quality is horrible. What's worse is that even the characters' names are spelt wrong. One of the examples would be the latest chapter's spelling of Lily Evans - the writer spelt it at Lili Evens. Seriously? This goes beyond laziness and I've attempted to give this book a try after all the reviews. Even simple words like 'because' are shortened to 'cause', It just seems like the writer puts no thought into his chapters. It also leads me to believe that the writer is very young or English is not their first language. If these two reasons are the cause for the quality of this book, then I don't think the writer should be condemned, If not - then the writer needs to think more about the quality of each chapter he publishes.

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It took me around 50 chapters to react into the story Many spelling errors Many plot holes (especially at the beginning) So either suffer the first third of the fic and loose enough brain cells to make it "acceptable" Or just simply don't read it

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Great story development, character development and mood development. Author did a great job in making the story to not feel forced but still making it unique and interesting. I really liked the fact that the MC is not reliant on anyone but still has the basic capacity to care about others. Highly recommend.

I am dropping this because the MC is unpalatable with a dark Batman back story and I hate HP fan fictions that try to prove Muggles are better than wizards [write a Star Trek instead of magic]. Some readers will love the edgy Harry but I don't like A hole MCs personally. anyway the concept of the AU was great and his family living was cool but that's it the rest was like a dark soap opera. Any way give it a read if you like the above aspects. Good day.

I couldn’t get past the first three chapters. I assume it gets better but why waste the brain cells? It was shaping up to be another oblivious MC story and I can’t tell if that’s because those types of MCs are easier to write or the author is just a moron.

when will you continue this fanfiction ???? please do not drop it the fanfic is good ....[img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]

You’re story is all summary and pretty much no character interaction/development. And no, training chapters are not character development. So I read like 40 chapters and honestly the story is just plain boring. Nothing interesting has happened and I don’t believe anything interesting will happen if I read another 100 chapters. There’s also the fact that you don’t seem to proofread any chapter before posting it?

Keep going please.Good start. Keep going please.Good start. Keep going please.Good start. Keep going please.Good start. Keep going please.Good start. Keep going please.

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A great book so far with amazing potential.

Honestly I’ve seen this for a long time now and was like “ugh another HP fanfic SKIP”, but eventually I gave in and was like why not? ..... ... . SO GOOD! The spelling and grammar leaves something to be desired but I fell into a trance reading this and read the whole thing start to finish in one sitting. Couldn’t stop and can’t wait for more!