Item: Harry Potter but AU???
Rating: 2.2
Author: StarWriting

StarWritingLv104yr

2020-06-07 19:31

You’re story is all summary and pretty much no character interaction/development. And no, training chapters are not character development. So I read like 40 chapters and honestly the story is just plain boring. Nothing interesting has happened and I don’t believe anything interesting will happen if I read another 100 chapters. There’s also the fact that you don’t seem to proofread any chapter before posting it?

Harry Potter but AU???

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