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Carrotwarrior
CarrotwarriorLv44yr
2020-04-22 13:30

Great story development, character development and mood development. Author did a great job in making the story to not feel forced but still making it unique and interesting. I really liked the fact that the MC is not reliant on anyone but still has the basic capacity to care about others. Highly recommend.

Harry Potter but AU???

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4.3
217 Chs

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SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

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GreatJerk
GreatJerkLv6

what does "AU" means? ............................................... .................................. ................... ..... . pls reply

5yr

reader41532
reader41532Lv11

it could have been interesting if everything was not either cliche or without commun sense. But god the dialogue are awful, il make everything hard to read

5yr
KnightShade420
KnightShade420Lv14

Reveal spoiler

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ksreader
ksreaderLv4

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4yr
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

First what I do not care for..I hate when writers make an HP fan fiction and make muggles and science BETTER than magic [Its like saying a nuke is better than a wish from God] it takes away from what JKR created. That said if you do not mind this mind set than its a good read, AUs are refreshing.

4yr
MIKK
MIKKLv11

The writing quality is horrible. What's worse is that even the characters' names are spelt wrong. One of the examples would be the latest chapter's spelling of Lily Evans - the writer spelt it at Lili Evens. Seriously? This goes beyond laziness and I've attempted to give this book a try after all the reviews. Even simple words like 'because' are shortened to 'cause', It just seems like the writer puts no thought into his chapters. It also leads me to believe that the writer is very young or English is not their first language. If these two reasons are the cause for the quality of this book, then I don't think the writer should be condemned, If not - then the writer needs to think more about the quality of each chapter he publishes.

4yr
aleksandar2003
aleksandar2003Lv4

****ty story XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

5yr
Makikap711
Makikap711Lv4

It took me around 50 chapters to react into the story Many spelling errors Many plot holes (especially at the beginning) So either suffer the first third of the fic and loose enough brain cells to make it "acceptable" Or just simply don't read it

4yr
Uchiha_Zen
Uchiha_ZenLv3

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