Preach good sir. Why bother writing a Harry Potter fanfiction if you are going to trash magic and focus on technology. Makes 0 sense. People read HP fanfiction for OP magic and potential witch waifus. Not technology bullshit, if i wanted that i would read some Star Trek bullshit

Food a fellow enlightened reader!

Es para darle sentido y tener un sistema de poder como la magia controlado y manejando el progreso de poderes del prota.

My good sir,i dont agree with you,i think what the author was.trying to say is that by using a scientific mind,you can push magic to higher degree,afterall,knowledge without understanding,believe and magical intent is useless

Sure if what you said matched how I read the story I would believe your words...but thanks for trying.

I dont mean to be rude, but there are hundreds of HP fictions, it is not a rule that you must read all of them and even like them. If you dont like one a few days or a week later a new different one will appear that is how it is

No worries you haven’t been rude, we are just exercising our right to express what pleases us in a story and what doesn’t. Also the review is useful for people who have similar tastes to see whether they would enjoy the story or not. That way if they love the magic aspect of HP then they see this review amd know the story is not for them so they don’t waste time reading something they don’t find enjoyable!

I agree the part where astronomy is far behind muggles makes no sense.was a real turn off.

Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

Bueno comparar un deseo de un dios con una bomba nuclear no se puede, pero si lo que pide con el misil o me vas a decir que si yo deseo un pikachu va a ser mas fuerte que una bomba nuclear ?