Item: Harry Potter but AU???
Rating: 1.6
Author: reader41532

reader41532Lv44yr

2020-04-05 19:57

it could have been interesting if everything was not either cliche or without commun sense. But god the dialogue are awful, il make everything hard to read

Harry Potter but AU???

DAFR

4.3

217 Chs

Liked by 47 people

Replies7

Supreme_DevilLv4

Sight its gets much better, especially the last chapter that theory was fucking incredible

4yr

Lethal_DrinkerLv4

It doesn't get better it gets needlessly complicated with mc creating time branches, paradoxes, multiple personalities in his head and bunch of other bullshit

Supreme_Devil:Sight its gets much better, especially the last chapter that theory was fucking incredible

4yr

BrabbitXLv5

wow, sounds like a mind ****. "Ain't nobody got time for that"

Lethal_Drinker:It doesn't get better it gets needlessly complicated with mc creating time branches, paradoxes, multiple personalities in his head and bunch of other bullshit

4yr

yaya_sotaLv10

It's not getting better and even Charachters like Madame Pmpfrey are being tuggerd trught the mud. Expect thats its an interresting Story

3yr

IronMLv4

yea first 10 ch and i;m out

3yr

OutofideasLOLLv13

This review is horrible. How can you comment on grammar when you yourself don't follow its rules?

2yr

SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

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****ty story XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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