streek135
The back story is sweet,,,,,,never expected to read about the mma and dana in an FF but its dope,,,,,since MC is strong,...hopefully you wont neuter him,,,,,,no harem is also nice..though.....well..........keep your will strong,,,,do not be tempted by the harem sect........... suggestion: Keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff......also keep the chps long but pls reduce the paragraph size.......kinda hard to read **: is MC going to have leviathan DF??......also maybe put MC in marine?
Hey author san can you pls continue this its good though its a hidden gem Hope you continue this .........[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The novel up until chapter 7 is really good.The chapters are long,the grammar is good and the story is really well paced and fun to read.His devil fruit is also a mystical zoan which grant 's him the power of leviathan which is really cool by the way.So if you are looking for a good read , this is what you need. Hope the author keeps up the good work.👍👍👍