I like we’re this is heading it’s really well written and has good character development (prologue) and the mc’s personality and past are awesome. Hopefully he trains with the former Rogers crew member and learns haki and how to control his Devil fruit and maybe even some of the marine movies. It’d be cool if he learned about the history disscused in this list chapter two but not about the specifics of the war and he’d have to find out about that himself by going to raftel. It looks like you already have shirahoshi as the main love interest based on the tags but if you decide to got small harem route like 2-3 members you should add robin depending on when In the timeline since she shares the same interest as the giant who’ll probably raise the mc even though he’s mentally mature since he needs to learn about the world and if he learns how to read poneyglyph then they will be some of the only people in the world able to and will have something in common. hopefully he’s also a couple years older then luffy to and realizes he’s in the one piece world and remembers a little about it to but didn’t realize it because he only knows about names like gol d Roger and a few other names or plot things but not many details like Devil fruits.
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