Swee2Pea
Taurus, born in 96', hobbies are reading, playing games, etc. Weakness is a short attention span. Wait why am I doing this?
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Swee2Pea1yrCommentedhe may get struck by lightning thinking like this...
Worry for someone... some emotion I was feeling after a long time.- Swee2Pea1yrReplied to H2Oz_Anxious
thank you! lol!
Just like grandma, I wasn't attracted to this little one. - Swee2Pea1yrCommented
Danger! pedo!!
I accept that he was hot, like... mouth-watering hot and I wanted to see that strong body that held me without those thick clothes but, I wasn't attracted to him. - Swee2Pea1yrCommented
dodged!!
Just like grandma, I wasn't attracted to this little one. - Swee2Pea1yrCommented
hey! I think you spelt this wrong: Oger is supposed to be Ogre right? although it doesn't really matter that much 😛
The (item box) was already full of the dead bodies of the oger and lizard. Now I had to carry this important thing on hand. - Swee2Pea1yrCommented
20 is old?!?! WHAT!!
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okay buy how many ways can you breathe at once... won't you start hyperventilating? xD
"As I said, 'breathing styles' which meant that ALL of them." I grinned at him. - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
same actually
I nodded and spun the wheel as I saw it slowly land on 'Merlin' as I mumbled, "I watched all it but I don't remember much of it." - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
I'm not sure if I'm wrong or not but keeping pokemon in his internal space is pretty unethical right? It'd be like the equivalent of keeping your dogs in the kennel all the time since he has a small space, especially if he puts a bunch in there. The sentret family's interaction kind of disappointed me since I was hoping he'd make friends with them and maybe play with the baby a bit and go home leaving a positive vibe instead of a creepy and greedy one that he left instead. I still love the story, but I want the main character to continue being a good person.
Ch 19 CH19, First Pokemon Variant - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
don't forget the most popular ones: fanfic.net, ao3, and wattpad!
If I have time, I will actually add this to other sites, such as Royal road, Scriblehub, Novelupdates and etc. - Swee2Pea2yrReplied to Abadom
Writing is a lot of work so I definitely get that! Thank you for being so passionate in this story. I love your writing even though I've only recently found this fanfic. Props to you for going the extra mile and giving us extra content as rewards for voting. I can only imagine how difficult it is to come up with side chapters for fanfics though. Since the originals usually have side chapters itself. If I were to throw in any ideas, maybe something to do with the importance of the scarf? Or a side chapter about the Goddess Hestia and her daily activities while he's in the dungeon? This is before she met Bell so even though she's following the same route a bit earlier, maybe there's other things she does as well? Or maybe a side chapter about how Bell is doing with his still alive grandfather? Although he's no longer the main protagonist of the story since yours is now, he'll still be a useful ally and friend down the road. Sorry for not understanding your motives before and for my mediocre ideas. You've probably thought of them before. Keep up the good work!
I have been thinking if I should drop in a side chapter about the Mc last life. - Swee2Pea2yrReplied to Abadom
oh okay that makes sense
I have been thinking if I should drop in a side chapter about the Mc last life. - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
I'm not a huge fan of side chapters personally. I like the main story
I have been thinking if I should drop in a side chapter about the Mc last life. - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
eyeliner...?????
Konoha, how could there be no eyeliner. - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
guess I'm not American then
You can't be American without knowing how to shoot a gun. - Swee2Pea2yrReplied to EroGaki
Takumi Usui?
(A/N: Lu Chen looks like this --> paragraph note) - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
Young Prince makes me think of Bambi, but its still better than young master so keep it?
(A/N: Should I use young prince or young master here? What do my readers think? I'm going to change it later though) - Swee2Pea2yrCommented
I don't think he should really have this mindset. If you wanted him to go down this route and kill villains ya should have made him a vigilante instead. It's illegal for heros to kill intentionally like that. He could probably escape jail cause he's fast enough but will eventually be labeled a criminal and everything he worked for is for nothing.
Anyway, that doesn't matter to me, I guess that would be considered a 'freedom' restriction. Honestly, if I was in charge no villain would see the cell of prison and neither will they see some type of fancy execution… something like just a bullet to the head is way more efficient. - Swee2Pea2yrReplied to imaginefragments
yeah im not into Yuri either. I'd prefer if the female oc went after one of the guys
Gender: ? - Swee2Pea2yrReplied to Gulth
it was 3
{Ok so quick retcon- apparently Luffy meats Ace and Sabo when he is seven (Ace and Sabo are ten) so I'm changing his age to seven. this will have little to no impact on the story just wanted to be close to the original timeline. other then that you may have noticed that my first chapters all varied in their tone, that was because I am a new writer and I wanted to experiment a little to see where my comfort zone is. but now I think I found it so the tone will be more uniformed. enjoy the chapter}